| User | nameless_nobody | | Topic | lyrics | | Message | how the fuck do you write lyrics in a way that other people can understand how its suposed to sound. when i write how it sounds when i sing it in my head im acused of bad grammar. its just so difficult to get people to understand how it is suposed to sound. any song writters out there got ant advice? |
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| User | Mister Fizzle | 2004-10-04 | | | Subject | untitled | | Message | first off, people are not going to get the melody. they need to hear it. it’s like trying to give someone a cake without icing. it’s not bad but it’s definatly missing something.
one thing that does help a little though is good enjambment. meaning break the lines in the proper places. heres a song we are all familiar with as an example:
please allow me
to introduce myself
I’m a man
of wealth
and taste
blah blah blah
you guys all know sympathy for the devil
anyway thats enjambment.
it helps some with lyrics.
peace,
fizzle |
| User | Brooke | 2004-09-27 | | | Subject | Lyrics | | Message | You shouldn’t give afuck about the people who DONT get what you are trying to say...REAL artists will know what you are saying and where you are comming from. Dont spend your time trying to satisfy them, writing is about making yourself happy, and expressing how you feel. Many people probably feel the same way, and they can relate to your songs. The people who dont even try to, dont deserve to hear what you had to say. Just worry about the people that appreciate your work, and apreciate them!!! Good Luck! |
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