| User | Maki |
| Topic | Deadly poisoned |
| Message | Deadly poisoned
There’s a look on a face of regret There are those words I’d like to forget. How life had taunted me so, To kill and bury me below. All Time is still and will never lighten, In the dark I stand always frightened. Your whispers have all grown vague, My life now in a swelling haze. How can this picture of existence Run my every day with more pretense? My heart is cold but half on fire, My mind is here but over tired. All of me have found a reason, That leaves me with this bleeding lesion- There’s a look on a face of dejected, She needs her heart to be uninfected- By the disease that started it. i know of a few places that need help but other wise.. i think is ok. tell me what you think please. |
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| User | camoflage | 2004-09-29 | |
| Subject | untitled |
| Message | *wild applase, and too much shouting*that was really, um.....I don’t even know how to explain it.It was interseting....my favorite part was:
my heart is cold but half on fire, my mind is here but over tired.Great job. -camoflage |