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 User  WolfgangTG 
 Topic  Im new to writing. 
 Message  Ok, im 16, from England, just left school. I have never been good at english at school, but recently I found the love of my life. Thing is, she doesn’t feel the same way. Anyway, before she knew I wrote something to make myself feel better, ended up sending it stupid me. Anyway, i showed it to a friend and she said that it is an amazing peice of writing, that was just one person. I would like it if some other people could say honestly what they think, because in a way I enjoyed writing it. Give me hints and tips.


Im sure you had no idea but…..















I just want to make you very happy…..


…..I know I could if I had the chance.


The distance between us is far…..


…..but in my heart you are so close to me.


You are the most beautiful person I have ever seen…..


…..and you have the most beautiful personality to go with it.


I want to hold you tight…..


…..but will that ever be possible?


I want nobody else to have you…..


…..but will I ever get you?


Every detail of your life…..


…..means a lot more to me than you think.


I see what you have in your life…..


…..I want to be a part of it.


I have had my fair amount of ‘loves’…..


…..but it wasn’t real love.


I imagine what my life would be like with you in it…..


…..it would be so much brighter.


How could he turn you down…..


…..when you are so beautiful.


Every new thing I learnt from you…..


…..made me fall for you.


How is it possible to fall for somebody so easily…..


…..is it because you could be my soul mate.


Have you ever read a book and you feel very much for a certain character…..


…..this is the same for me, only real.


I know you may not have the love for me…..


…..but you have a place in my heart always.


I just had to confess…..


…..Am I lonely? Am I in need of a friend? Or am I finally in love?




I am so confused; I have never felt like this before. How can this happen over text and pictures? You probably don’t understand and neither do I.


Does how your day went matter at all to me…..


…..the happier you are, the happier I am.


I’m sorry.....
 

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