User  Porcelaine 
 Topic  Need votes 
 Message  Hey, I’m a member for two weeks, more or less, and since then I posted around twenty poems. The comments of others made my life easier but not any of my poems got one single vote. No one even voted that any of them sucked. No one ever voted on any of my poems. If you could please read at least a couple of them and vote or even just leave more comments it would mean the world to me. I could use the support. Here’s one of my poems to help you decide if you even want to help:

ASYLUM

Dream asleep and dream awake
Nightmare Child you’re now forsake
Sin of beauty, vow in vain
Silent now, you strain in pain

Tempest, you, so fierce a force
Gore, destroy with no remorse
As beautiful as cruel you are
Annihilation gray by far

Renegade of this wide land
Footsteps blown away with sand
Skies are kind to those who seek
To be the strongest when they’re weak

Creed, you burn in others flame
Forlorn, you renounce your reign
Single heart, a beat, a thought
Cannot stand for what they fought

Revenant, the souls descend
Bear the future, grieve, amend
End of seasons ’fore a storm
Died in blood, in blood reborn
 

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 User   PiperH | 2006-09-07 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  I’ve been here for about two months already, and I haven’t recieved any votes either. I think it’s juts because people like to tell you what they thought of your poem, rather then just rating it. But isnce I’m here, I’ll vote on some of your poems. I really liked the one you put up there.  

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