| User | Angel_Sin | | Topic | do not forsake me | | Message | Yes, do not forsake me my dear strangers! It’s so hard to find a spot within numerous posts, to exist and be read. If I resort to a dramatic word like" forsake", I’m trying to make an appeal to sensitive souls as a way to counteract the invisibility that plagues me.
I hope someone will read, and comment some of the stuff that I’ve posted>
Please,
tell me it’s ghastly, tell me it’s nonesensical,tell me it’s naive,tell me it’s idiotic,tell me it’s forgettable,tell me it’s a waste of time, tell me it hurt your eyes or spirit, tell me ...
but plz do not ignore me, it makes me feel redundant( I know I’m a ridiculous person, donno what else to be). Alright, Cao.
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| User | yamifox | 2007-03-23 | | | Subject | ??? | | Message | is it possible that you actually brought out one of my emotions.... thats no kou... and and kou at the same time |
| User | Yasou | 2007-02-02 | | | Subject | untitled | | Message | Forsaken on a site like this? I would certainly hope not or I’m in the wrong place. You should never judge a book by its cover, pardon the pun, and the same should apply to people. By the way, you don’t have to be sorry that you want somebody to comment on your work. Heck, I think anybody here would appreciate that. Especially with your being new here, the newer writers are often looked on as inferior and the such, but generally not true in the least. Just because it’s your first time on a writing website does not mean that’s your a bad writer and I certainly hope that you don’t get that feeling when you post your work here. I will try to offer my help when I can. :) |
| User | puppet | 2007-01-25 | | | Subject | untitled | | Message | you have appealed to my sensitive soul |
| User | Keaira | 2007-01-05 | | | Subject | untitled | | Message | Consider ur self not forsaken...
i shall be off 2 chek out ur stuff now... |
| User | darkness | 2006-12-19 | | | Subject | untitled | | Message | funny. We shall not forsake you. |
| User | Itzu | 2006-12-11 | | | Subject | untitled | | Message | I won’t forsake you. Keep your chin up. |
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