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 User  pattopping 
 Topic  Hello 
 Message  My name’s Pat Topping, and I’m new hear. I hope to share some of my writing and junk... 

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 User   lovesucker | 2007-02-25 |
 Subject  hi! 
 Message  as you grow as a writer, you become more critical about your works. something that would’ve gone unnoticed in your last story, may be brought up to your attention in your next. i do not stipulate that you are a writer who doesn’t proofread his/her work at all. i’m not one to judge. but you should keep your eyes open to little details that some people will detect immediately. eh...i just want to help ^^". i don’t mean to offend you in any way (if i have, i am SO SORRY! ;_;)

i do look forward to reading your writing! i hope that you take this into account as constructive (not offensive, like i think it has--sorry again!) criticism when you plan to post up something. =P

 

 User   pattopping | 2007-02-23 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  Grammar be umpotent? I am aware of my mistake. Don’t assume I disregard good grammar just because I wrote faster than I thought and didn’t proofread, please. Anywho.... 

 User   Yasou | 2007-02-02 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  Welcome to the site and good to meet you Pat, I look forward to reading your work in the future. Don’t worry about the grammar right now, it happens to all of us from time to time. :) 

 User   GoKart Mozart | 2007-02-01 |
 Subject  well 
 Message  let’s start by a grammar lesson... "hear" is something that you do with your "ear" (there’s a hint within the word!)....i know the way i worded that sounds kind of rude so i’ll just go ahead and apologize, but i think you should know that good poets/writers/artists of all types are very in tune with grammar...it can make or break a work of art. i believe the word for which you are searching is "here." =] 

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