| User | pattopping | | Topic | Hello | | Message | My name’s Pat Topping, and I’m new hear. I hope to share some of my writing and junk... |
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| User | lovesucker | 2007-02-25 | | | Subject | hi! | | Message | as you grow as a writer, you become more critical about your works. something that would’ve gone unnoticed in your last story, may be brought up to your attention in your next. i do not stipulate that you are a writer who doesn’t proofread his/her work at all. i’m not one to judge. but you should keep your eyes open to little details that some people will detect immediately. eh...i just want to help ^^". i don’t mean to offend you in any way (if i have, i am SO SORRY! ;_;)
i do look forward to reading your writing! i hope that you take this into account as constructive (not offensive, like i think it has--sorry again!) criticism when you plan to post up something. =P
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| User | pattopping | 2007-02-23 | | | Subject | untitled | | Message | Grammar be umpotent? I am aware of my mistake. Don’t assume I disregard good grammar just because I wrote faster than I thought and didn’t proofread, please. Anywho.... |
| User | Yasou | 2007-02-02 | | | Subject | untitled | | Message | Welcome to the site and good to meet you Pat, I look forward to reading your work in the future. Don’t worry about the grammar right now, it happens to all of us from time to time. :) |
| User | GoKart Mozart | 2007-02-01 | | | Subject | well | | Message | let’s start by a grammar lesson... "hear" is something that you do with your "ear" (there’s a hint within the word!)....i know the way i worded that sounds kind of rude so i’ll just go ahead and apologize, but i think you should know that good poets/writers/artists of all types are very in tune with grammar...it can make or break a work of art. i believe the word for which you are searching is "here." =] |
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