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    dotsJournal: dots
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    Mood: The Usual

    Look at what a lovely young man sent me:

    Subject: untitled
    From: EternitysLyre
    On: 2004-06-22
    Message:

    Welll. Now that I have pm, I'm going to much less....kind.

    That poem sucked outright and we both agree. Behind that, your other two poems sucked too. Are those your best work? I was trying to read through something like 30 or 40 poems just now, and I didn't comment on them, you know why?

    Take your most wild guess. I wasn't awestruck, obviously, as I was responding quite quickly to your assault on my person, and I wasn't ignoring you either.

    Your comment was...baseless and vague.

    My comment was balanced, very balanced. I made neither negative nor positive on my first comment, do you realize? I was trying to be objective.

    *grins* now that this is up close and personal, and everyone can read it nice and clear on your page, I'm going to pull the stops and make a full-blown critique.

    First off, you are ugly. Stop putting that picture of yourself up. I'm ugly too, but what's more important is what Ms. Self-important thinks.

    Now, as for your poetry, I daresay I'm quite impressed. Although your work is in general too short for the likes a verbose me, it captures the minute shades of emotion that I have very little success in working on.

    However, that doesn't mean you're good. Now that you're comforted, I'm going to have fun criticizing every poem I want.


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    ...Created 2004-06-22 08:35:56

    dotsJournal: dots
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    Mood: The Usual

    Check out this kind private message a lovely young man sent me:

    Subject: untitled
    From: EternitysLyre
    On: 2004-06-22
    Message:

    Welll. Now that I have pm, I'm going to much less....kind.

    That poem sucked outright and we both agree. Behind that, your other two poems sucked too. Are those your best work? I was trying to read through something like 30 or 40 poems just now, and I didn't comment on them, you know why?

    Take your most wild guess. I wasn't awestruck, obviously, as I was responding quite quickly to your assault on my person, and I wasn't ignoring you either.

    Your comment was...baseless and vague.

    My comment was balanced, very balanced. I made neither negative nor positive on my first comment, do you realize? I was trying to be objective.

    *grins* now that this is up close and personal, and everyone can read it nice and clear on your page, I'm going to pull the stops and make a full-blown critique.

    First off, you are ugly. Stop putting that picture of yourself up. I'm ugly too, but what's more important is what Ms. Self-important thinks.

    Now, as for your poetry, I daresay I'm quite impressed. Although your work is in general too short for the likes a verbose me, it captures the minute shades of emotion that I have very little success in working on.

    However, that doesn't mean you're good. Now that you're comforted, I'm going to have fun criticizing every poem I want.


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    [ Delete this Entry ]

    ...Created 2004-06-22 08:34:24

    dotsJournal: Witnessdots
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    Mood: Crazy

    With you as my witness, I was here tonight. That is all.

    ...Created 2004-06-22 05:58:04

    dotsJournal: So you knew?dots
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    Mood: Crazy

    If you knew, why didn't you tell me? You know what i'm talking about! This is it, this is the last straw. I wont let you take me on this ride any further. Leave me alone!

    ....I wont smoke anymore!

    ...Created 2004-06-22 05:33:41

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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