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    dotsJournal: MEEEEEEdots
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    Mood: Guess what!?

    back to action. i'll be switching in between here and my blog to drop posts. i use the tumblog mostly for rap shit, just a little fyi.

    thegridsquid.tumblr.com

    guess who's here to smash again!!

    ...Created 2008-09-11 23:44:32

    dotsJournal: woweedots
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    Mood: shit, is that a fucking indian

    i can't help but think that maybe i'm the one that starts the fight
    that picks nothing up where we left off
    when she gets set off
    i just get lost in her
    i can't help but stare at her when she's among the other boys
    and piss and moan but keep on coming back
    i feel a stab coming on
    but she's just an angel

    and i know she's not too happy
    but i can pretend that she
    i can pretend that she
    cannot be commanded
    and she can't stand me
    still

    i'm hooked on an alibi
    i'm so love in love with the thought of you and I
    and she's a princess
    and i'm just the princess's guy

    i can't stand the thought of losing this in the fray
    but i'm still in today
    with her name
    carved in the bark
    i can't stand the dark of night because it feels too right
    its feeling like i'll be alone
    just waiting for you to come
    just waiting for the outcome

    and i know she's not too happy
    but i can pretend that she
    i can pretend that she
    cannot be commanded
    and she can't stand me
    still

    i'm hooked on an alibi
    i'm so love in love with the thought of you and I
    and she's a princess
    and i'm just the princess's guy

    i'm slaughtered by the thought of you and I
    i'm caught up by the thought of a homicide
    she's a magnet for my type
    i've got a heavy heart made of sparks

    ...Created 2006-06-26 23:32:07

    dotsJournal: rotdots
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    Mood: Crazy


    i can feel the others waiting for the minute to come
    when my hum drum problems become conundrums once again
    all the pens in my pocket burst, thirsty for air
    and i'm craving the paper to put their spare energy there
    in a blink of the eye, i'm glossed over and made perfect
    in a dream, cuz if the means meet the ends, then it ain't worth it
    i'm gonna step through the gates though i hate church
    and blame the apes of this earth for why i brake curfew
    i'm in the state of mind that merks you depending on where your house lies
    cause if your mind in the green space, consider it wild
    i'm an imposter, cause its impossible to be so problemed
    when i'm no longer a child, and i have fewer options
    nobody told me to proceed with caution
    so i tip toed through open windows with goals and found an army created to stop them
    im in between a rock and a rolling stone
    broken in its original form, a child of the corn
    a mile behind the norm i'm pretending to be at the forfront of
    but i forfeit poetry and love for a drug and an empty plastic cup
    fuck it, i'm so far in denile, i'm loving the gap
    and building bridges to croos the traps but still so far back
    so far, its been that same fact repeatedly drilled into my willpower
    and still i sit drooling with a ruler willing to kill a kid's wrist, the little apple-polisher
    the bitch with a chick who thinks he's whipped
    but i'm a con artist,
    ya see, i'm on top of the broad when she's not with me
    you'd think this juggling personalities is tricky
    but i been changing up background since men were worth $6.50
    meaning, yes, i intend to continue to lie
    and never reply with answers, just a wink of the eye
    and i rot, as the epitomy of atrophy, the muscle eating disease
    that manages to strong arm patients and leave nothing but debris

    is it al over yet? can i say that regret has no hold here
    i'm cold here, alone with no support, gotta get grown
    gotta spit so the shit you don't know is so known
    that you're sick of hearing it and you wanna help me out
    but i can't expect anyone to help me now
    cause i'm like a disclaimer for overbearing parents and even more so condescending homies that know me more than i do
    i'm stalled in a 6ty-sumthin impala in that drive through
    asking the kid on the other side to get me a needle and an ice-cube

    ...Created 2006-05-28 15:45:55

    dotsJournal: dots
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    Mood: The Usual

    i should've just ran into the traffic

    ...Created 2006-04-30 20:33:45

    dotsJournal: dots
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    Mood: Overwhelmed

    i'm biting all my fingernails, the anticipation is thick
    i get more anxious after reading my mentor's shit
    i'm sweating bricks, convulsions and ticks
    i'm restless
    pacing around my room with a deathwish
    hectic, why try, i may as well forget this
    this task has it written on its chest "don't fuck with texas"
    i'm impressed by its weapons, i'm unarmed and charmed
    planning on getting harassed by this stunning young bastard
    but on the other hand are the bombs i hide in desert scenery
    this man plans to be mean to me but i'm not going down easily
    what ever happened to the anxiety, the terrified feeling of the pressure of society
    this one in specific, i amaze with raps i transcribe into hieroglyphics
    for you, a privalege to hear this nigga ripping it
    i'm so obviously self-esteemless,
    but you wouldn't believe i'm self-conscious

    ...Created 2006-01-03 19:04:13

    dotsJournal: dots
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    Mood: The Usual

    i'd like some more input on stay inside the lines. i'd really like some speciaifcs on what ican do to fix it. like which lines to get rid of, which i can change. let me know yl. i'm trying to improve.

    ...Created 2006-01-01 00:59:33

    dotsJournal: dots
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    Mood: The Usual

    no cred, i'm brain dead
    should be ambitious for more than the bread of man
    so the kid reaches for riches instead
    iches and dizzy spells that seem to last forever

    ...Created 2005-12-26 15:35:49

    dotsJournal: What is This?dots
    -------------------------------------------
    Mood: Overwhelmed

    she hardly knew me
    but she judged me as if she did
    i'm not the type ride a bike home to my fifty kids and some iffy chick who had em
    talk about shifty, she twitched alot
    and to cover up he licked on my neck while we were sitting in the the parking lot
    slow down a little, ma
    tap the brakes and steer clear of affection before you make a mistake
    but i forgo caution and care
    ran my hands through her hair
    and after it all i said i would try to be there
    so, i'm still there and i hate the climate
    the whole deal is killing me slowly and she's over in the corner dying laughing
    she forgot about that law making trespassing illegal
    and made a b-line for my every waking moment like a needle

    ...Created 2005-11-28 12:12:01

    dotsJournal: What is This?dots
    -------------------------------------------
    Mood: Overwhelmed

    she hardly knew me
    but she judged me as if she did
    i'm not the type ride a bike home to my fifty kids and some iffy chick who had em
    talk about shifty, she twitched alot
    and to cover up he licked on my neck while we were sitting in the the parking lot
    slow down a little, ma
    tap the brakes and steer clear of affection before you make a mistake
    but i forgo caution and care
    ran my hands through her hair
    and after it all i said i would try to be there
    so, i'm still there and i hate the climate
    the whole deal is killing me slowly and she's over in the corner dying laughing
    she forgot about that law making trespassing illegal
    and made a b-line for my attention like a needle

    ...Created 2005-11-28 12:10:53

    dotsJournal: WIPdots
    -------------------------------------------
    Mood: The Usual

    i want to fall asleep
    deep inside of your arms
    massage your palms
    change the way the world works so you'll never be wrong

    ...Created 2005-11-25 18:26:56

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