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    dotsJournal: My shit suck?dots
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    Mood: Thinking...

    Got out of bed and wonder if people read my stuff. No they didnít comment. Do I have to rent this site or start a fight to get a critique? Maybe they think it sucks because they canít understand. So many what the fucks, and drop the pen in my hand.

    ...Created 2006-07-07 19:14:39

    dotsJournal: Thoughtsdots
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    Mood: Thinking...

    I find my self lost in thought of what could have been if I persued to get to know her but I was young and dumb, and dont think I had that much cum, cause I was to young.

    ...Created 2006-01-04 00:21:47

    dotsJournal: Balancedots
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    Mood: The Usual

    [Slug]
    They love the taste of blood
    Now I don't know what that means, but I know that I mean it
    Maybe they're as evil as they seem
    Or maybe I only look out the window when it's scenic
    "Atmosphere finally made a good record
    Yeah right, that shit almost sounds convincing"
    The last time I felt a sinking contradictive as this
    Was the last time we played a show in Cinnci'
    "Get real." they tell me
    If only they knew how real this life really gets
    They would stop acting like a silly bitch
    They would respect the cock whether or not they believed in it

    Doesn't take much and that's messed up
    Because these people do alot of simple shit to impress us
    While everyone was tryin to out-do the last man
    I was just a ghost tryin to catch some respect man
    Hello ma'am would you be interested
    In some sexual positions and emotional investments
    See, I'm not insane, in fact I'm kind of rational
    When I be askin' "yo where did all the passion go?"
    East coast, West coast, down South, Midwest
    Nowadays everybody knows how to get fresh
    Somebody give ma a big yes (yes!)
    God bless America but she stole the B from "Bless" (accept it)
    Now I'm too fucked up to dance
    So I'ma sit with my hand down the front of my pants
    You can't achieve your goals if you don't take that chance
    So go pry open that trunk and get those amps (you know!)

    [Chorus x2]
    In the days of kings and queens I was a jester
    Treat me like a god or they treat me like a leper
    You see me move back and forth between both
    I'm trying to find a balance
    I'm trying to build a balance

    So now I keep a close eye on my pets
    Because they make most of they moves off of instinct and sense
    It's eat, sleep, fuck in self defense
    So straight you can set your locks and place bets
    Wait, let's prey on blind, deaf, dumb, dead
    Hustle, maybe a couple will love what you said
    Emcees drag their feet across a big naked land
    With an empty bag of seed and a fake shake of hands
    Yeah I got some last words, Fuck All Ya'll!
    Stop writin' raps and go play volleyball
    Gotta journey the world in a hurry
    Cause my attorney didn't put enough girls on the jury
    Guilty of droppin' these bombs in the city
    But I'm innocent, love is the motive that's why you're killin 'em
    Guilty of settin' my fire in all fifty
    But I'm innocent, blame it on my equilibrium

    [Chorus x2]
    In the days of kings and queens I was a jester
    Treat me like a god or they treat me like a leper
    You see me move back and forth betweeen both
    I'm trying to find a balance
    I'm trying to build a balance

    Now all my friends are famous
    It's either one thing or another
    They all don't know what my name is
    Probably know both of my brothers
    The one is a hard workin' savior
    The other's a hard workin' solider
    I'm just your next door neighbor
    Workin' hard at tryin' to stay sober
    You wait for the car at the corner
    Pretend like you know what the pot is
    Won't quit till I hit California
    And make you my Golden State goddess

    ...Created 2005-12-29 22:49:50

    dotsJournal: Nikki2dots
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    Mood: The Usual

    hey go read nikki then read Nikki 2 and left me know if I did good.

    ...Created 2005-12-20 06:38:35

    dotsJournal: Budski Udskidots
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    Mood: Relaxing

    I got some killer buds from cali. Like all I been doing is getting good stuff. Like 50 Cent says--Cali weed got me so high. but this my favorite line from him-----touch me tease me kiss please me. I give it to you just how you like it girl. Now you tell me thats not one of the most romantic shit.

    ...Created 2005-12-18 03:31:02

    dotsJournal: Bud Surchdots
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    Mood: Relaxing

    Last night I drove for cronic. I thought I was getting a half O for $50, and a 8er of dank for $50 But I spent the hudo on A Q of Damk. So 2 8rs. And its realy good.

    ...Created 2005-12-14 11:31:59

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


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