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    dotsJournal: 10 years dots
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    Mood: Too much at once...

    10 years on this website.

    That's something ain't it? I owe a lot to this place. The ability of expression, concept, execution and interaction served me well. This place is in me. A part of me.


    As fellow user put it "it may be the same location, but it isn't the same place".

    His username is rws btw. Hope he's doing fine. Huge influence on me.


    I am writing this on a device I could never have dreamed of when I posted my first critiques here. My 1 year old son is sleeping beside me. I truly have seen some shit in that time and it was beautiful in an apocalyptic way..


    Yes Bill, you're right. It's not the same place anymore, and we're not the same person and it's not the same world. And that's ok. That's fine. It's totally fine to orbit the same sun. We're expanding further away from the center anyways. A wild ride on this rock it is and whatever comes, I'll welcome it with open arms and greet the asteroid like an old friend.

    ...Created 2016-09-12 13:51:09

    dotsJournal: i repeatdots
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    Mood: The Usual

    I DONT HAVE LYSDEXIA!

    ...Created 2011-09-02 20:46:21

    dotsJournal: dots
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    Mood: The Usual

    i was going to draw my hallucinations but my pencil turned into a snake.

    ...Created 2011-07-14 20:03:43

    dotsJournal: blog?dots
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    Mood: writing the future

    i guess im not really much of a blogger. stream of consciousness lacks wit. been reading some old blogs from some old friends who think that no one is reading. needless to say they've been rarely updating their respective pages.

    finally looking at mine. there are things about them that really gives you a peek inside what goes on in your head at the time, and only in retrospect could we accurately decipher the clues of the seemingly random clickety-clack of keyboards 2, 4, or even 5 years ago!

    like this bit from 2007: if they stuff too much of it down your throat, and you get too bloated to move, you lose your taste for freedom and cease to pursue it!

    it was a blog about conformity. being an unwitting Cassandra myself eventually lead to my incarceration of a year. currently out on bail. variably, once inside the joint, it is nothing but conformity. how odd.

    odd that i should have wrote a better blog. maybe i wouldnt have ended up in jail. maybe this is the key to retroactively repair one's future...

    maybe if we wrote about it (blogs or posts on this site), positively, and well enough, then perhaps we can subconsciously shape our lives for the better! if you're a singer perhaps happier and productive songs? now in my case, i do not know how to write like that. it looks like im somewhat screwed for the moment. and that my future seems iffy at best. so im cleaning up the cynical act. good day.

    ...Created 2011-06-29 13:38:42

    dotsJournal: blue birddots
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    Mood: Straightening things out...

    Still let my tyrants know, I am not doomed to wear
    Year after year in gloom, and desolate despair;
    A messenger of Hope comes every night to me,
    And offers for short life, eternal liberty

    -emily bronte

    a few days shy of a full year behind bars. an experience i would not suggest but enlightening none the less. oh sweet blue bird of freedom.

    ...Created 2011-05-31 14:43:35

    dotsJournal: seasonaldots
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    Mood: the same old new year!

    happy new year to all!


    will post soon after more comments have been distributed. stocks are low for the moment. but a new shipment of clever one liners, tongue in buttcheek remarks and profound realizations are in store for you in 2009!

    once again, happy new year to all!

    ...Created 2008-12-31 06:25:19

    dotsJournal: present hiatusdots
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    Mood: prodigal son....


    Once upon a time, a hobbit by the name of fardo baggins once joined an online writing workshop. young little fardo enjoyed it spectacularly with much fervor and felt the growth of a young poet- as we all experienced once at a point in our seemingly senseless lives...


    unfortunately for the little hobbit tragedy bestruck his curly head of hair! economics! the all consuming machine looming over the green and blue horizons of the earth:


    fastfood

    lembas bread

    internet bills

    gas(oats for the occasional horseback)

    clothing

    elvish cloaks

    longbottom leaf

    beer


    ... the costs of which threatening to devour all within its ravenous steel trap maw! our brave hobbit was left with but once choice.




    ~*~ end of chapter ~*~










    editor's note: please view pietro's latest post to find out what happened next to our favorite little furry writer!

    ...Created 2008-09-17 08:32:21

    dotsJournal: conformitydots
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    Mood: Frustrated

    *sigh

    if they stuff too much of it down your throat, and you get too bloated to move, you lose your taste for freedom and cease to pursue it!

    GODDAMMIT!

    ...Created 2007-11-02 10:18:52

    dotsJournal: sights...dots
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    Mood: amative

    capilano is a river in one of the only temperate rainforests in north america, located in the pacific coast of canada. also in capilano is the world famous suspension bridge (thrilling naturally since 1889), the trees were quite humbling, domineering and dominating every lowly being, oh, keepers of the skies, oh stewards of the heavens. the air was rich, and i drank it, and was inebriated by nature as only capilano can. it took my breath away....

    what also took my breath away was this strip bar i patronized later that day (Mugs and Jugs). the ladies, lithe and nimble, hypnotic and highly coordinated. a deadly combo. aryans, asians, canadians, and one blondie with glasses did this thing with some lotion after removing every item of clothing from her voluptuous body.

    exotic dancers = entertainment.

    way better and more enthusiastic than the ones back home.




















































    i wish i didnt have to go home.














    p.s. i totally know where alteredlife is coming from when it comes to white women...

    ...Created 2007-08-26 01:27:11

    dotsJournal: Surrey, B.C.?dots
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    Mood: i cant feel my balls

    why yes, i am in canada as of the moment. managed to nab a few minutes of computer time. anyhow.. be back in that island in the pacific in a few weeks. will try and check up here once in a while. cheers!

    even in the summer its cold here.

    ...Created 2007-08-18 13:43:10

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    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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