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    dotsJournal: Apologies...dots
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    Mood: The Usual

    Thanks for all the comments ladies and gentlemen(SMH!) but yes, i'm still sorry I havent been around alot anymore, just got a new apartment with my girlfriend.. and we don't have the net.. so I get on when I can.. it's depressing.. ah well!

    ...Created 2007-01-25 18:33:22

    dotsJournal: Creativity...dots
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    Mood: The Usual

    I've noticed not everyone writes for a creative outlet.. some write as a simple release.. but when a piece is completly uncreative, a hybrid of cliché and boring teenage angst.. what can you really say? and then people get upset when it isn't reguarded as an absolute masterpiece of the modern english language!

    I guess what I'm getting at, is the skill one has a writer- of any type of written piece.. if it be poetry, stories, lyrics.. etc. Skill isn't just about rhyme schemes, and formation.. but also about the disturbion of topic content.. about finding new, and inventive ways to display a feeling you may have, but say and do it differantly then everyone else.

    Otherwise you'll occasionally get comments you won't approve of. I don't considering myself a talent by any means, I've recieved my own fair share of negetive fedback here on Elite Skills.. do you hear me complaining? No.. I try to adress every issues, and build on them.

    I hate to say it kids, but you want criticism, try a dose of reality mixed in there and they call it CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.

    With anything requiring skill, there will always three differant types...

    Those who can.
    Those who cant.
    Those who cant, but think they can.

    The third in this case will of course write a poem about how they cut themselves after I said something "mean" to them..

    cry me a river.

    ...Created 2006-12-03 14:53:21

    dotsJournal: Back!dots
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    Mood: The Usual

    I'm back folks, I won't explain where I went.. No one here cares!

    ...Created 2006-11-29 17:29:27

    dotsJournal: Bahhdots
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    Mood: Sick

    ...

    this site sucks. lol...

    I try to leave atleast 2-3 comments every day on differant pieces.

    and I've had 3 comments back... Come on. Thats crazy. Maybe it's just me, but I've spent alot of time on sites with the same idea as this and It's always worked that if I fed, I got feed(back) you know? It's crazy. Lets see if stuff picks up, I've seen some peoples stuff with 150-200 views and only 8 comments.. Thats crazy. Who ever runs this site needs to do something about it... Require feed(back) on others works before you can submit your own or something... I don't know. It's an effective method.


    COMMENT MY STUFF PEOPLE.


    thanks.

    ...Created 2006-10-25 21:22:30

    dotsJournal: ZFixing a typo.dots
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    Mood: The Usual

    nondotcom RAP forum, sorry about that folks...

    Also, I'm still trying to figure out the site kiddos, while submitting some of my old stuff. so I will be commenting when I figure stuff out.

    ...Created 2006-10-13 22:08:34

    dotsJournal: New to this...dots
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    Mood: The Usual

    I'm really new to this website, still debating if I really like it here or not. I've spent the past two years on two of the internets most frequented NON-dotcom webforums. so, I'm used to dropping a new song, or some form of "poetry" and recieving near immediate feed-back. things seem to move realllllyyyy slow here. but we'll see.

    ...Created 2006-10-13 19:30:47

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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