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    dotsJournal: March 2007dots
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    Mood: Depressed

    hello world
    I wish i could die
    i really wish i had the guts
    cause im tired
    of this pain
    feeling like i cant go on

    ...Created 2007-03-28 02:11:18

    dotsJournal: Inspired Skydots
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    Mood: The Usual

    I would like to thank Inspired Sky for helping me get through alot of things.through reading her poetry.truly talented and very good. read her stuff.

    ...Created 2005-07-11 21:37:24

    dotsJournal: dots
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    Mood: Sad

    Hey Guys,
    Im not sure if i really want to live anymore.Everything seems like it gets better but than it jsut falls straight down a week or so later.My best friend stole my man.i dont have any friends.I got hope but thats slowly fadding away.Ive never been so depressed.I need a friend but i got none.They all just wanted my dumb man.He cheated on me too.But i was so stupid.I guess i should have never trusted anyone eh?But i did so w/e.I guess ill get better but that well take awhile so my poetry should be good i guess.Love ya all
    Alysun

    ...Created 2005-06-12 22:57:59

    dotsJournal: dots
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    Mood: Sad

    [Persephone] Guys Please pray for her friend Natalie when you go to bed tonight.Natalie is only six and shes sick with a diease called "Lupus"!I know i well.Be Brave Natalie!!!!

    ...Created 2005-05-24 22:25:26

    dotsJournal: dots
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    Mood: Overwhelmed

    Wanna kno why my mood is overwhelmed.Ok seriously tonight i read this two most best poems ive ever read today.I loved them so much i added them to my fav's but that doesnt seem like enough so i gota let you guys expreience these poems.There that good.
    First onces by Huan Yue.

    Parents...
    -------------------------------------------

    The police are at my door,
    asking for my parents.
    What have they done NOW?
    Every other month,
    There's a poepoe at the door.
    My parents are stuck,
    traped in their little world.

    I am in charged at home,
    I am the parent at my house,
    No one even cares.
    They used my college funds
    They took all my earnings,
    And now thier in the Bahamas,
    and they've left me with nothing.

    They do this oh so often,
    It makes me want to scream,
    I've tried to hide my money,
    but they seem to know,
    where its at and then they go.
    It's off to somwhere new,
    This is nothing unfamilar.

    Can't wait to turn 18,
    Then it's off to start over.
    I'll go to another state.
    I'll meet new people,
    and my life will change,
    No more Mom,
    No more Dad...

    Second ones by Geraldine.

    Life Sucks, Then Ya Die!
    -------------------------------------------

    OCD, ADD,
    An STD, just one.
    Anxiety, Depression,
    This life is so much fun!

    Stressful days, sleepless nights,
    A job that really sucks.
    A single mom, without a friend,
    No social life, no luck!

    Whining kids, a messy house,
    No time to wash my hair.
    Tom and Jerry all day long,
    Oh God, I need a beer!

    Under-eye bags, broken nails,
    No time to shave my legs.
    The only way to get a guy,
    Is after he pounds a keg!

    Flirtatious and seductive,
    Big boobs that turned some heads.
    Many drunken pick-up lines,
    To get me in their beds!

    Goodbye to Mrs. Sexy,
    Hello to Mrs. Mom.
    No more one-night stands for me,
    And that's my sad, sad song!

    now im gunna advirtise my fav poem i wrote.

    What Gives
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    Remember this,
    Respect is to be earned,
    Not Just Granted,
    Like A Wish.

    So Don't Just go assuming,
    Im gunna automatic give it to you,
    Especially with that big attitude,
    of Yours.

    I'll Clean the kitchen,
    So Shut-up,
    And I'll be doing it,
    For Me and My Family,
    Not For your fat mouthly mouth.

    Normailly im not rude,
    Cause i don't believe in being,
    As low as you,
    Also,
    You drove me and my families,
    Patience,
    Thanks for the Singing compliment.
    But your fat mouth and attitude,
    Arent helpin this situation.

    You dont pay rent,
    So what gives you the right,
    To take over,
    What makes your think your so great.

    Sure i dont do much of anything,
    But have you walked in my shoes,
    Do you understand how i feel,
    If you must kno,
    I cry each day,
    Inside i feel dead,
    I think im crap,
    And the thanks for tellin me that.

    I thought 32 years olds,
    Were sopposed to act 32,
    not 16,
    Arent they not sopposed to,
    Threaten?,
    And Mentally Abuse?,
    So next time grow up..

    ...Created 2005-05-23 22:49:10

    dotsJournal: Monday W/edots
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    Mood: The Usual

    Whad Up People,
    Not too much is new with me.Most likley getting rid of my fiance.hes such a goof at times lamo.umm my hair finally is getting back to normal it was really frizzy.God damn hair dye.I wrote some new material i hope yall like it.anyways i thought i'd write here.
    Peace,
    Alysun-Lynn wannabe walker

    ...Created 2005-05-23 22:20:55

    dotsJournal: Tues/May/10/05dots
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    Mood: The Usual

    Happy NOthing Again Day

    Dear What ever this is;
    Well thanks for the comments again.especially all the ones from munchie!

    Alysun

    ...Created 2005-05-11 17:39:20

    dotsJournal: Monday/May/9/05dots
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    Mood: The Usual

    Happy NOTHING DAY

    Dear what ever this is;
    well thanks guys for all the new comments.i took some time out today and did some critques for you guys.Today was not exactally the best day for me at all.But hey when the sun doesnt shine make it shine..lol!Well sometimes i guess it dont work like dat!Anyways my day was bad because they person i wrote the poem "the bully named Verniece" was bullying/being rude, to me today but hey i aint gunna cry no river over her.Shes lame and is lookin for some attention.. the wrong way.Anyways to my haters and lovers have a great fun spunky day tomorrow!

    Peace
    Alysun

    ...Created 2005-05-09 21:14:46

    dotsJournal: Sunday/May/8/05dots
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    Mood: The Usual

    Happy Mother's Day Yall!
    Dear: Whatever this is;
    Well thanks for the comments guys.I really appreicate them.They really do mean alot.Ive only been on her for alil over a week and ive competely fallin in love with this site.Who ever created this site is genious and i want to give them a big pat on the back and say thanks for all the hard work.To all the poets on here.. your all so talented and so kind.Thanks for the critques they really help.Anyways this weekend i went to saskatoon with my dad.It was awesome.. cause i got to spend some actual time with my dad for once!Anyways Peace Yall
    And thanks
    Rainin_Raspberry

    ...Created 2005-05-09 00:04:25

    dotsJournal: May/5th/2005dots
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    Mood: The Usual

    Dear; What ever this is,
    Terrible tradgic day.Wrote awesome poem though!
    Anyways this is my first jornal.Im not exactally sure what to say.other than thnx for the feed back people.And all your guys poems rule even the ones that need alil work.Anyways thnx if your a fan or hater of my work

    Alysun

    ...Created 2005-05-05 23:10:38



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