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    dotsJournal: My Personalitydots
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    Mood: Straightening things out...

    I think this pretty much sums me up perfectly, well at least the true me.

    Advanced Global Personality Test Results

    Extraversion |||||||||| 40%
    Stability || 10%
    Orderliness |||||||||||||| 56%
    Accommodation |||||||||||||||||| 76%
    Interdependence |||||||||| 36%
    Intellectual |||||||||||| 43%
    Mystical |||||||||| 36%
    Artistic |||||||||||||||||||| 90%
    Religious |||||| 30%
    Hedonism |||||| 30%
    Materialism |||||||||||| 50%
    Narcissism || 10%
    Adventurousness |||||||||| 36%
    Work ethic |||||||||||||||| 70%
    Self absorbed |||||| 30%
    Conflict seeking |||||||||||| 43%
    Need to dominate |||||||||||||||| 70%
    Romantic |||||||||||||||| 70%
    Avoidant |||||| 30%
    Anti-authority |||||||||||| 43%
    Wealth |||||||||| 36%
    Dependency |||||||||||||| 56%
    Change averse |||||||||||| 43%
    Cautiousness |||||||||||||||| 70%
    Individuality |||||||||||||||| 70%
    Sexuality |||||||||||||| 56%
    Peter pan complex |||||| 23%
    Physical security |||||||||||| 43%
    Physical fitness |||||||||||| 50%
    Histrionic |||||| 30%
    Paranoia |||||||||||||||||||| 83%
    Vanity |||| 16%
    Hypersensitivity |||||||||||||||||||| 90%
    Female cliché |||||||||||||||| 70%

    Stability results were very low which suggests you are extremely worrying, insecure, emotional, and anxious.

    Orderliness results were moderately high which suggests you are, at times, overly organized, reliable, neat, and hard working at the expense of flexibility, efficiency, spontaneity, and fun.

    Extraversion results were moderately low which suggests you are reclusive, quiet, unassertive, and secretive.

    trait snapshot:
    introverted, irritable, feels invisible, observer, depressed, does not enjoy leadership, reveals little about self, dislikes large parties, feels undesirable, does not like to stand out, submissive, suspicious, emotionally sensitive, not a thrill seeker, solitude loving, likes silence, fragile, second guesses self, negative, unadventurous, fearful, weird, focuses on people's hidden motives, paranoid, phobic, dependent, cautious, avoidant, semi intellectual

    ...Created 2006-03-04 01:57:14

    dotsJournal: What is It?dots
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    Mood: Thinking...

    Hey,

    I was just reviewing once agin what teen agnst poetry is. When a question popped into my head is that my poetry, if so how can I make it more then that. I try to take horrible feelings etc and make them more then just teen agnst. Don't get me wrong theres nothing wron with that type of poetry, I just want to make sure my poetry can be more than that, mabe get published etc.

    *Let it Flow*
    Raven

    P.s.
    Any comments would be greatly apprecitated

    ...Created 2006-02-03 02:02:42

    dotsJournal: Story Helpdots
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    Mood: Confused

    Hey,

    As you already know I wrote the following story, but upon reaching the last paragraph I ran out of ideas. If any one could help I'd really like to finish this story:

    The sly way he came in, like he owned me. He left the same way, with that look in his eyes. It will stay with me forever, along with the thoughts and the feelings. That was the earliest memory I have of my father. I still live with him, even though each day I grow to hate him more. I could never bring myself to leave him though or my sister. It had always been the three of us, since mom left. Everyday when I wake up, it’s like a tug of war between who to hate more. My father who’s continuous abuse I must suffer day in and day out, to protect my sister. Or my mother who left me and my sister with that bastard, how awful I hope it makes her feel everyday of her life.

    The more and more time goes by, the more my father wins the war. His sly look of deep controlling satisfaction, it’s his fault we are the way we are. First he took my innocence then my sister, my little sister! I still remember the day it happened, I went down to breakfast. Everything was like a normal family’s house would be, my dad cooking breakfast like we were the ideal family. In his sick twisted eyes we were, his two girl’s blonde hair, blue eyes perfect head to toe. Inside was where everything fell apart, the hurt and daily torture was enough to make anyone kill them selves. Not us though, not the picture perfect family, the family who’s only tragedy was old town gossip.

    My sister sat at the table in her private school outfit, golden locks of hair in a long tight braid. She did look almost look like a perfect china doll, but there was something wrong, something missing, the way she fidgeted and barely touched her toast, the look in her eyes of hidden misery, the childhood spark gone. Stolen was more like it by the man we called are father, the man who is supposed to protect her, ironically was the man who destroyed her. I knew from the look in both of their eyes that morning, things were going to be different; I could no longer shelter my sister. I now had to get her out of their, and save the last of her innocence.

    The rest of the day went smoothly, if you can call it that. I drove my sister to school; she was still being tortured in the inside. I knew the feeling well, a feeling of being soiled, untouchable, and betrayed.

    *Let it Flow*
    Raven

    ...Created 2006-02-01 15:16:24

    dotsJournal: End of schooldots
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    Mood: Head Aching

    Hey,

    When the end of a term comes up its fun and hectic. Why you may ask, first of I have to study for exams, then i have to be extremely prepared for our very hectic crazy final drama play. To add to all of that we have 11 days, can you say staying after school much. For Our final play we have so many technical things and extras, and props etc. to worry about. There is the one large play the "Musical" where there is extras needed and lights and of course singing. Then there is a short movie to be played on the white screen, so there editing there. Then my group has 2 short play, one is a parody of top model and for that we need pictures a fierce-o-meter and lots of light things. Then our groups other small play is a Filme Noire, we don't even know who they talk in these films yet, we will also need extar to play random mobsters and cops. Its all just sooooooo crazy, but I wouldnt have it any other way. Its one of the best feelings in the world to be on that stage and knowing that a thing of beauty came from all thoose long hetic days of work. You can't forget the feelings after its all done of accomplishing something, feeling relaxed etc.

    *Let it Flow*
    Raven

    ...Created 2006-01-19 16:02:04

    dotsJournal: Semi-Blockdots
    -------------------------------------------
    Mood: Straightening things out...

    Hey,

    This will prouably sound out of this world. Here goes, Lately I've had writters block, ok thats not really crazy. The wierd thing is thought I can't write poetry, I can still write story. The funnier things I'm not a story writter, so were these storys are coming from who knows. Oh well atleast I can still write something, and I like being able to write storys.

    *Let it Flow*
    Raven

    ...Created 2006-01-06 14:27:37

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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