Journal: I need feedback -------------------------------------------Mood: Brain FriedSo i am trying to write an origional novel and I have so far written three different versions of the first chapter. Each version, is in a rough first stage so please excuse any errors such as consistency and dead ends.
What I need, is some feed back on which chapter people like more. Please be as critical as you can, I want to know what you like about the chapter, what you hated, if something isn't explained properly etc.
I will post each chapter in a new submission, so it doesn't get confusing.
Also, please note that the names I am using tend to change throughout each chapter, this is because I am still trying to find a name that stands out.....so if the name of the character suddenly changes from say Alec to Max to Gideon, this is because I have been trying these on for size and may not have caught some of them.
Thank you for the feedback guys, again please be as critical as you can...Created 2009-07-21 21:28:03 |
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