Mood: The Usual"Isn't it odd how much fatter a book gets when you've read it several times?...As if something were left between the pages every time you read it. Feelings, thoughts, sounds, smells...and then when you look at the book again many years later, you find yourself there too, a slightly younger self, slightly different, as if the book had preserved you, like a pressed flower... both strange and familiar." - Inkheart
...Created 2009-07-22 21:20:35
Journal: I need feedback -------------------------------------------
Mood: Brain FriedSo i am trying to write an origional novel and I have so far written three different versions of the first chapter. Each version, is in a rough first stage so please excuse any errors such as consistency and dead ends.
What I need, is some feed back on which chapter people like more. Please be as critical as you can, I want to know what you like about the chapter, what you hated, if something isn't explained properly etc.
I will post each chapter in a new submission, so it doesn't get confusing.
Also, please note that the names I am using tend to change throughout each chapter, this is because I am still trying to find a name that stands out.....so if the name of the character suddenly changes from say Alec to Max to Gideon, this is because I have been trying these on for size and may not have caught some of them.
Thank you for the feedback guys, again please be as critical as you can...Created 2009-07-21 21:28:03
Mood: Thinking..."Isn't it odd how much fatter a book gets when you've read it several times?...As if something were left between the pages every time you read it. Feelings, thoughts, sounds, smells...and then when you look at the book again many years later, you find yourself there too, a slightly younger self, slightly different, as if the book had preserved you, like a pressed flower... both strange and familiar." - Inkheart...Created 2009-04-29 22:45:11
Mood: TiredLife gets so busy sometimes that I hardly have time to stop and see what has fallen off the back of this truck I call my life, it's only now that things are starting to sort out that I can go back and pick up what I might have lost...Created 2007-09-03 20:36:05
Mood: The UsualI can't help but notice that has been very quiet on elite recently, no one on my stalker list has posted anything in a very long time, my page is like a ghost town.....where is every one?????
Anyone out there?...Created 2007-05-30 19:35:38
Journal: thank you -------------------------------------------
Mood: Head AchingHello All,
I thought I would write a quick thank you to all those who have supported my writings over the past yeaar or so, I really want to thank Ronswords for never failing to comment on a new piece I add - your comments have helped me develop my writing and has given me the confidence to keep writing.
Most of all I want to thank Stormyskies (my big sis) - Thank yuo for encouraging me to sign up in the first place and put my poems out there for the world to scrutinize lol if it wasn't for you i wouod never have had the guts to let people into my world however twistedit may be lol. And for always encouraging me to be who I am and loving me the only way a big sister can.
Mood: The Usualdont know what to write but i was getting sick of the old journal.
I love the newest poem i wrote 9 to 5 as someone pointed out The Devil Wears Prada was kind of my inspiration but i was just thinking about how monotonous *sp* my daily life is, maybe I should shake things up a bit by getting drunk or something...Created 2006-10-10 01:08:55
Mood: FrumpyI am contemplating joining Weight Watchers, to help me lose the weight that I need to lose. But I really don't want to do it alone. I know I need the help but I think if I went with my Mum it'll give me the extra motivation and support that I need because then there will be someone at home who knows exactly what I need to be eating.
I hate looking this way, I feel sick whenever I look in the mirror or a shop window, I mentioned to my partner the way I have been feeling and he told me not to worry about it but he doesn't know what it is like to look at yourself and HATE what you see.
I guess if I have to do it alone, I have to and there's is not much choice. Maybe if Mum and I did it together it would make us closer. I have become such a mummies girl lately, but then I guess I always have been it's only been over the last few months to a year that I have seen her as a friend as well as my mum.
Anyway wish me luck my first meeting is tonight....Created 2006-09-03 20:51:08
Mood: Sigh...I'm in a funny mood lately, I think I am happy but I'm not really happy, usually I start out being happy and then by the time the day is over I am frustrated and annoyed. Alot of stuff has happened since my last journal post. I think I have become a little bit bitter about some personal stuff, I really need to learn how to build a bridge!!!
My most recent poem Skinny Leg Jeans, I know it's not a very good poem but I am sickl to death of opening my magazine and seeing celebrities bones I might add to it later. Am having a bit of trouble with writing down what I am feeling lately. partly because I am so full of emotions that I can't get them all out onto paper and partly because I don't think I could bare my soul like that and let people know how i am really feeling...Created 2006-07-25 21:50:19
Mood: The UsualWell I've started my new job,
not allowed to surf the net but I do what I can when my boss isn't here. Havent done alot of writing just owrking on my novel which is slowly coming together so watch out for it in a book store soon lol...Created 2006-03-26 23:38:36