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    dotsJournal: an old favdots
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    Mood: The Usual

    She lives in the city
    under the sea.

    Prisoner of pirates
    prisoner of dreams

    I want to be w/her
    want her to see

    The things I've created
    sea-shells that bleed

    Sensitive seeds
    of impossible warships

    Dragon-fly hovers
    & wavers & teases

    The weeds & his wings
    are in terrible fury

    ...Created 2005-10-21 12:29:42

    dotsJournal: THE DESERTdots
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    Mood: Relaxing

    - roseate metallic blue
    & inscet green

    blank mirrors &
    pools of silver

    a universe in
    one body


    by, Jim Morrison of THE DOORS

    ...Created 2005-07-26 07:16:57

    dotsJournal: THE DESERTdots
    -------------------------------------------
    Mood: Relaxing

    - roseate metallic blue
    &inscet green

    blank mirrors &
    pools of silver

    a universe in
    one body


    by, Jim Morrison of THE DOORS

    ...Created 2005-07-26 07:16:27

    dotsJournal: THE DESERTdots
    -------------------------------------------
    Mood: Relaxing

    -roseate metallic blue
    &inscet green

    blank mirrors &
    pools of silver

    a universe in
    one body


    by, Jim Morrison of THE DOORS

    ...Created 2005-07-26 07:15:55

    dotsJournal: favorite poemdots
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    Mood: Guess what!?

    this is my favorite poem ever written.
    It's an old song by pink floyd. To me it's talking about the world befor we were here and how the eath changed from all water to having some land. How we aventually evolved from haveing instinct to reason, useing our mind to lead us through the land and wondering why, and where we came from. Questioning ourselves to no limit intell we find religion and asume something greater than ourselves created us. Being only the sun, the light that lets us be, not undeerstanding that it's the sun we feel and what gives all life energy we call to a god or a higher being instead and create an immage. The sun is god I think, the feeling we get that warms our soul, that created life and could destroy it.

    Here's the words to one of the most deep and intellegant poems I've ever read.
    Pink Floyd
    echoe's

    Overhead the albatross hangs motionless upon the air
    And deep beneath the rolling waves in labyrinths of coral caves
    The echo of a distant tide
    Comes willowing across the sand
    And everything is green and submarine
    And no one showed us to the land
    And no one knows the wheres or whys
    But something stirs and
    Something tries
    And starts to climb towards the light
    Strangers passing in the street
    By chance two separate glances meet
    And I am you and what I see is me
    And do I take you by the hand
    And lead you through the land
    And help me understand the best I can
    And no one calls us to the land
    And no one forces down our eyes
    And no one speaks
    And no one tries
    And no one flies around the sun
    Cloudless every day you fall
    Upon my waking eyes
    Inviting and inciting me to rise
    And through the window in the wall
    Comes streamin in on sunlight wings
    A million bright ambassadors of morning
    And no one sings me lullabies
    And no one makes me close my eyes
    So I throw the windows wide
    And call to you across the sky.

    ...Created 2005-04-03 00:37:30

    dotsJournal: dots
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    Mood: Sad

    THE SQUERLS ATTACK AT MIDNIGHT

    AND THE CLOWNS ARE ON MY SIDE

    ...Created 2005-03-16 07:14:00

    dotsJournal: dots
    -------------------------------------------
    Mood: Ugh... I hate my life.

    He has to quit,
    he has to quit,
    but FUCK! he don't know how.

    Everyday just drains his will.
    Every night just sits in tear.

    He lost his heart in the distant nightmare of shallow honesty.
    His soul so blinded by the brightness ran from himself.
    Adrift on heavy clouds he sat,
    floats back through the doors he once
    had painted upon those shaded walls.
    The tone of saddness never fades from his whispered voice.

    He has to quit,
    he has to quit,
    he feels he has no choice.

    Only falling down.
    The dred of broken moonlight.
    Those stars that watch never seemed so bright.
    The closing demon eyes that blink.
    Echoes from the walls of hopeless calls for help.
    Taunted by his own mind.
    He shivers while in summers arms.
    So awakend by his mind that sleeps through reality.

    His life drains,
    his wisdom pains in panes of sheltered fear.
    Every cloudless day to him is dark black clouds that rain.

    He has to quit,
    he has to quit,
    SHIT!
    I just can't pass,
    I fall so sleepless,
    awakend by this posioned hit.

    ...Created 2005-03-14 20:46:01

    dotsJournal: dots
    -------------------------------------------
    Mood: Ugh... I hate my life.

    He has to quit,
    he has to quit,
    but FUCK! he don't know how.

    Everyday just drains his will.
    Every night just sits in tear.

    He lost his heart in the distant nightmareof shallow honesty.
    His soul so blinded by the brightnessran from himself.
    Adrift on heavy clouds he sat,
    floats back through the doors he once
    had painted upon those shaded walls.
    The tone of saddness never fades from his whispered voice.

    He has to quit,
    he has to quit,
    he feels he has no choice.

    Only falling down.
    The dred of broken moonlight.
    Those stars that watch never seemed so bright.
    The closing demon eyes that blink.
    Echoes from the walls of hopelesscalls for help.
    Taunted by his own mind.
    He shivers while in summers arms.
    So awakend by his mind that sleepsthrough reality.

    His life drains,
    his wisdom pains in panes of sheltered fear.
    Every cloudless day to him is dark blackclouds that rain.

    He has to quit,
    he has to quit,
    SHIT!
    I just can't pass,
    I fall so sleepless,
    awakend by this posioned hit.

    ...Created 2005-03-14 20:42:14

    dotsJournal: LOONYdots
    -------------------------------------------
    Mood: Brain Fried

    THE SQUERLS ATTACK AT MIDNIGHT

    AND THE CLOWNS ARE ON MY SIDE

    ...Created 2005-03-13 23:52:00

    dotsJournal: LOONYdots
    -------------------------------------------
    Mood: Brain Fried

    THE SQUERLS ATTACK AT MIDNIGHT

    AND THE CLOUNS ARE ON MY SIDE

    ...Created 2005-03-13 23:49:54

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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