Journal: Bad, Mojy!! -------------------------------------------Mood: DANG IT!Well, this is a gripping read, nice wordage and rhyme, and I like the angels crying thing, because of the context and repeating lines coinciding, it doesn't come out as cliché at all, like it could if used in something like, your heart was broken by love and all the angels were crying, as a passing reference... I don't do "negative" but even if I did, I wouldn't have anything to say negatively towards this. It was like a mystery, too, because you didn't give much away... it could apply to a murder, a social wrong, or even in a political sense... but I don't know which, I'm guessing a personal level. That it can stretch to any, shows a good depth.
All in all, I enjoyed this, a wonderful first read on my first night back in awhile!
| Posted on 2009-07-08 00:00:00 | by grey_girl | [ Reply to This ] [ PM ]
Just look at who gave me this comment!! Omfg, am I retarded?! Do you have ANY idea how shitty I feel right now?!?
She left this on "The Angels Cry Tonight," a poem that I wasn't incredibly fond of myself (but reading the 2 comments, made me like it a bit more), and I'm hoping to whatever is out there that I responded accordingly, b/c if I didn't, then I'm a bitch.
This is terrible...
If she reads this, then I'm apologizing. Not b/c I see you left a nice comment so long ago but b/c I've realized that I started some really stupid shit. Discard all the shit I said b/c I didn't have to right to say it. I was very sensitive over your comment, but I had no right to be at all. Wish I would have handled it better.
-mo-...Created 2009-09-04 17:46:54 |
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