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    dotsJournal: dots
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    Mood: Tired

    Ten years changes the intent, the depth of the words being written. I would just as soon reread a great book, than extend my thoughts on paper.

    Just a brick wall, right now.

    ...Created 2016-09-12 21:12:31

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    Mood: Guess what!?

    I find I am very at home amongst others perfecting their work, their voice and their poetry. There is a lot to worry about in life, there seems to be a lot more which can and does go wrong, than does right. When I first tried writing on ES, I felt very welcome, and I hope to stay longer this time around. Thanks everyone.

    Tony

    ...Created 2012-10-29 19:44:26

    dotsJournal: Cinquaindots
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    Mood: Thinking...

    Distance
    Stones Throw
    Discover A World
    Without Love or Poetry
    Impossible

    This is my first attempt, what do you think? Does it follow the format? I know, its a simple stretch beyond writing simple poetry, but its a start. Let me know, thanks.

    ...Created 2009-01-09 01:26:27

    dotsJournal: differences...dots
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    Mood: Straightening things out...

    Its been months since Ive been around, Ive not meant to forget people, or the writing. My second son was born just two weeks ago, my wife and I have had our first real moments together...a lot of realization, a lot of understanding, to be sure. I love her all the more for it, though, to do it all over is not something Im so sure about.

    I intend on writing something great very soon. Just not tonight, there are dishes to do and a wife to sneak a kiss on...goodnight.

    Tony

    ...Created 2008-12-31 04:15:29

    dotsJournal: returned...dots
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    Mood: Yeay!!

    i havent written in quite some time. ive been back in the states for 8 months, so i really dont have an excuse. ive been filling a book, instead of sharing...

    ...Created 2007-09-04 17:24:27

    dotsJournal: hmmdots
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    Mood: Crazy

    i wish i could get more feedback...i understand im not on here so much anymore, but i read as many pieces as i can while i am one, give comments and whatnot, usually leave a submission, but no one seems to leave their thoughts for me! i mean, come on, who doesnt have a reaction after they read something? tell me it sucks, i mean, i would appreciate that, not as much as a constructive comment, but still, at least it was something...so come on people, start speaking your minds, everyone wants to know, you know...

    ...Created 2005-10-16 20:25:34

    dotsJournal: ta dadots
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    Mood: Overwhelmed

    im back, well at least for today...i havent posted in forever, so it will be nice to share something, and see what people think...training resumes later this week, not really looking forward to it, but the sooner its done the better...

    ...Created 2005-07-31 16:07:57

    dotsJournal: grrr...dots
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    Mood: The Usual

    army is 24/7 right now, no time to write...so sad, the feelings are there, the motivation calls me each night at 11pm, i hate and love time differences...almost as much as i wonder and dislike 0 comments on pieces, from 8 different people...so sad, comment, people, comment, it opens your mind, creates possibilities for your own work, just write your thoughts, good, bad or whatever, it all matters, and you never know, i just might be inspired by you...possibilities are endless...

    ...Created 2005-06-01 19:51:20

    dotsJournal: longing...dots
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    Mood: The Usual

    training takes up so much of my time, the writing I do seem to scratch out hardly seems worth it, such a depressing feeling when I used to love how it all sounded, what the words would mean...soon, I will get to go home, for two weeks, I cant wait, there is someone special waiting for me, and Ive been waiting so long for her...

    ...Created 2005-05-09 19:48:41

    dotsJournal: if only...dots
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    Mood: Sigh...

    the girl i love is so far away...she knows how I feel, too, but confusion bids her heart away, I wish there was something more I could do, because I would do it...soon enough, though, I will find her, I only hope that she is still looking for me, it will be the only thing holding me back...

    ...Created 2005-04-24 20:45:14

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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