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    dotsJournal: Missin Itdots
    -------------------------------------------
    Mood: Missin It

    Don't Want to Miss a Thing

    I could stay awake just to hear you breathing
    Watch you smile while you are sleeping
    While youre far away dreaming
    I could spend my life in this sweet surrender
    I could stay lost in this moment forever
    Every moment spent with you is a moment I treasure

    Dont want to close my eyes
    I dont want to fall asleep
    Cause Id miss you baby
    And I dont want to miss a thing
    Cause even when I dream of you
    The sweetest dream will never do
    Id still miss you baby
    And I dont want to miss a thing

    Lying close to you feeling your heart beating
    And Im wondering what youre dreaming
    Wondering if its me youre seeing
    Then I kiss your eyes
    And thank God were together
    I just want to stay with you in this moment forever
    Forever and ever

    Dont want to close my eyes
    I dont want to fall asleep
    Cause Id miss you baby
    And I dont want to miss a thing
    Cause even when I dream of you
    The sweetest dream will never do
    Id still miss you baby
    And I dont want to miss a thing

    I dont want to miss one smile
    I dont want to miss one kiss
    I just want to be with you
    Right here with you, just like this
    I just want to hold you close
    Feel your heart so close to mine
    And just stay here in this moment
    For all the rest of time

    Dont want to close my eyes
    I dont want to fall asleep
    Cause Id miss you baby
    And I dont want to miss a thing
    Cause even when I dream of you
    The sweetest dream will never do
    Id still miss you baby
    And I dont want to miss a thing

    Dont want to close my eyes
    I dont want to fall asleep
    I dont want to miss a thing

    ...Created 2007-06-06 22:16:33

    dotsJournal: 21 Questionsdots
    -------------------------------------------
    Mood: In Love

    just wanna chill and twist a lot
    Catch suns in my 7-45
    You drive me crazy shorty I
    Need to see you and feel you next to me
    I provide everything you need and I
    Like your smile I don't wanna see you cry
    Got some questions that I got to ask and I
    Hope you can come up with the answers babe

    [Nate Dogg]
    Girl...It's easy to love me now
    Would you love me if I was down and out?
    Would you still have love for me?
    Girl...It's easy to love me now
    Would you love me if I was down and out?
    Would you still have love for me?
    Girl...

    [50 Cent]
    If I feel off tomorrow would you still love me?
    If I didn't smell so good would you still hug me?
    If I got locked up and sentenced to a quarter century,
    Could I count on you to be there to support me mentally?
    If I went back to a hoopty from a Benz, would you poof and disappear like
    some of my friends?
    If I was hit and I was hurt would you be by my side?
    If it was time to put in work would you be down to ride?
    I'd get out and peel a nigga cap and chill and drive
    I'm asking questions to find out how you feel inside
    If I ain't rap 'cause I flipped burgers at Burger King
    would you be ashamed to tell your friends you feelin' me?
    And in bed if I used to my tongue, would you like that?
    If I wrote you a love letter would you write back?
    Now we can have a lil' drink you know a nightcap
    And we could go do what you like, I know you like that

    [Nate Dogg]
    Girl...It's easy to love me now
    Would you love me if I was down and out?
    Would you still have love for me?
    Girl...It's easy to love me now (Woo!)
    Would you love me if I was down and out?
    Would you still have love for me?
    Girl...

    [50 Cent]
    Now would you leave me if you're father found out I was thuggin'?
    Do you believe me when I tell you, you the one I'm loving?
    Are you mad 'cause I'm asking you 21 questions?
    Are you my soulmate? 'Cause if so, girl you a blessing
    Do you trust me enough, to tell me your dreams?
    I'm staring at ya' trying to figure how you got in them jeans
    If I was down would you say things to make me smile?
    I treat you how you want to be treated just teach me how
    If I was with some other chick and someone happened to see?
    And when you asked me about it I said it wasn't me
    Would you believe me? Or up and leave me?
    How deep is our bond if that's all it takes for you to be gone?
    And always remember girl we make mistakes, to make it up I do whatever it take
    I love you like a fat kid love cake
    You know my style I say anything to make you smile

    [Nate Dogg]
    Girl...It's easy to love me now
    Would you love me if I was down and out?
    Would you still have love for me?
    Girl...It's easy to love me now
    Would you love me if I was down and out?
    Would you still have love for me?
    Girl...

    Could you love me in a Bentley?
    Could you love me on a bus?
    I'll ask 21 questions, and they all about us
    Could you love me in a Bentley?
    Could you love me on a bus?
    I'll ask 21 questions, and they all about us

    This reminds me about my boyfriend Bradley so much...I love him so much...and I can't wait to be with him forever...kisses~Ashley~

    ...Created 2007-02-25 21:33:50

    dotsJournal: Brad's paperdots
    -------------------------------------------
    Mood: Just for you

    The message of this cartoon is simple. It is to show how President Bush has buried himself in a hole and can't get out, or rather he's sinking. It is supposed to make funny of how Bush cannot pull out of the war easily because he's drowning on all sides. He has lost support at home and has almost no support from other countries let alone the one he's at war with. It also makes fun of how no matter how much money he would like to throw at the national security problem and the problems across the way, money, is not the problem.

    This is a good example of satire because it holds President Bush accountable for the things he does. It exposes and explains some of the problems he has caused and is facing. It pokes fun at his stupidity when it comes to certain aspects of his presidency, such as, his Iraq war. It also attacks his mistakes with wit and sarcasm.

    This is an example of Horation satire because there is no anger or harshness in the cartoon. It uses sarcasm to gently attack president Bush's mistakes. It is light humor in the fact that it doesn't spell out completely what is wrong with his plans, but just touches on a few mess ups, on Bushs's part.

    ...Created 2007-02-25 21:25:32

    dotsJournal: 2/22/07dots
    -------------------------------------------
    Mood: Questionong???!!

    I just wanna chill and twist a lot
    Catch suns in my 7-45
    You drive me crazy shorty I
    Need to see you and feel you next to me
    I provide everything you need and I
    Like your smile I don't wanna see you cry
    Got some questions that I got to ask and I
    Hope you can come up with the answers babe


    Girl...It's easy to love me now
    Would you love me if I was down and out?
    Would you still have love for me?
    Girl...It's easy to love me now
    Would you love me if I was down and out?
    Would you still have love for me?
    Girl...


    If I feel off tomorrow would you still love me?
    If I didn't smell so good would you still hug me?
    If I got locked up and sentenced to a quarter century,
    Could I count on you to be there to support me mentally?
    If I went back to a hoopty from a Benz, would you poof and disappear like
    some of my friends?
    If I was hit and I was hurt would you be by my side?
    If it was time to put in work would you be down to ride?
    I'd get out and peel a nigga cap and chill and drive
    I'm asking questions to find out how you feel inside
    If I ain't rap 'cause I flipped burgers at Burger King
    would you be ashamed to tell your friends you feelin' me?
    And in bed if I used to my tongue, would you like that?
    If I wrote you a love letter would you write back?
    Now we can have a lil' drink you know a nightcap
    And we could go do what you like, I know you like that


    Girl...It's easy to love me now
    Would you love me if I was down and out?
    Would you still have love for me?
    Girl...It's easy to love me now (Woo!)
    Would you love me if I was down and out?
    Would you still have love for me?
    Girl...


    Now would you leave me if you're father found out I was thuggin'?
    Do you believe me when I tell you, you the one I'm loving?
    Are you mad 'cause I'm asking you 21 questions?
    Are you my soulmate? 'Cause if so, girl you a blessing
    Do you trust me enough, to tell me your dreams?
    I'm staring at ya' trying to figure how you got in them jeans
    If I was down would you say things to make me smile?
    I treat you how you want to be treated just teach me how
    If I was with some other chick and someone happened to see?
    And when you asked me about it I said it wasn't me
    Would you believe me? Or up and leave me?
    How deep is our bond if that's all it takes for you to be gone?
    And always remember girl we make mistakes, to make it up I do whatever it take
    I love you like a fat kid love cake
    You know my style I say anything to make you smile


    Girl...It's easy to love me now
    Would you love me if I was down and out?
    Would you still have love for me?
    Girl...It's easy to love me now
    Would you love me if I was down and out?
    Would you still have love for me?
    Girl...

    Could you love me in a Bentley?
    Could you love me on a bus?
    I'll ask 21 questions, and they all about us
    Could you love me in a Bentley?
    Could you love me on a bus?
    I'll ask 21 questions, and they all about us

    ...Created 2007-02-22 19:59:53

    dotsJournal: Outside-Stainddots
    -------------------------------------------
    Mood: Overwhelmed

    And you
    Can bring me to my knees
    Yeah

    All this time
    That I could make you breathe
    Yeah

    All the times
    That I felt insecure
    Yeah

    And I leave
    A burning path of flame

    (Chorus)
    Iím on the outside
    Iím looking in
    I can see through you
    See your true colors
    Cause inside youíre ugly
    Youíre Ugly like me
    I can see through you
    See to the real you

    All this time
    That I felt like this wonít add
    Once for you

    And I taste
    What I could never have
    Itís from you

    All those times
    That I tried
    My intentions
    Full of pride
    And I waist
    More time than anyone

    Iím on the outside
    Iím looking in
    I can see through you
    See your true colors
    Cause inside youíre ugly
    Youíre ugly like me
    I can see through you
    See to the real you

    All the times
    That Iíve cried
    All thatís wasted
    Itís all inside

    And I feel
    All this pain
    Stuffed it down
    Itís back again

    And I lie
    Here in bed
    All alone
    I canít mend

    And I feel
    Tomorrow will be okay
    But I know

    That Iím on the outside
    Iím looking in
    I can see through you
    See your true colors
    Cause inside youíre ugly
    Youíre ugly like me
    I can see through you
    See to the real you

    ...Created 2007-01-20 21:07:44

    dotsJournal: Wicked Gamedots
    -------------------------------------------
    Mood: Confused

    The world was on fire, no-one could save me but you
    It's strange what desire will make foolish people do
    I'd never dreamed that I'd need somebody like you
    And I'd never dreamed that I'd need somebody like you

    No I don't wanna fall in love
    this world is always gonna brake your heart
    No I don't wanna fall in love
    this world is always gonna brake your heart
    ..with you

    What a wicked game to play
    To make me feel this way
    What a wicked thing to do
    To let me dream of you
    What a wicked thing to say
    You never felt this way
    What a wicked thing you do
    To make me dream of you

    No I don't wanna fall in love
    this world is always gonna brake your heart
    No I don't wanna fall in love
    this world is always gonna brake your heart
    ..with you

    The world was on fire, no-one could save me but you
    It's strange what desire will make foolish people do
    No and I never dreamed that I'd love somebody like you
    I'll never dream that I lose somebody like you, no

    Now I wanna fall in love
    This world is always gonna brake your heart
    Now I wanna fall in lust
    This world is always gonna brake your heart
    ..with you

    Nobody loves no-one

    ...Created 2007-01-20 20:52:36

    dotsJournal: 01/08/07dots
    -------------------------------------------
    Mood: November Rain in January

    November Rain


    When I look into your eyes
    I can see a love restrained
    But darlin' when I hold you
    Don't you know I feel the same
    'Cause nothin' lasts forever
    And we both know hearts can change
    And it's hard to hold a candle
    In the cold November rain
    We've been through this such a long long time
    Just tryin' to kill the pain
    But lovers always come and lovers always go
    An no one's really sure who's lettin' go today
    Walking away
    If we could take the time to lay it on the line
    I could rest my head
    Just knowin' that you were mine
    All mine
    So if you want to love me
    then darlin' don't refrain
    Or I'll just end up walkin'
    In the cold November rain

    Do you need some time...on your own
    Do you need some time...all alone
    Everybody needs some time...on their own
    Don't you know you need some time...all alone
    I know it's hard to keep an open heart
    When even friends seem out to harm you
    But if you could heal a broken heart
    Wouldn't time be out to charm you

    Sometimes I need some time...on my
    own Sometimes I need some time...all alone
    Everybody needs some time...on their own
    Don't you know you need some time...all alone

    And when your fears subside
    And shadows still remain, ohhh yeahhh
    I know that you can love me
    When there's no one left to blame
    So never mind the darkness
    We still can find a way
    'Cause nothin' lasts forever
    Even cold November rain


    Don't ya think that you need somebody
    Don't ya think that you need someone
    Everybody needs somebody
    You're not the only one
    You're not the only one

    ...Created 2007-01-08 19:54:37

    dotsJournal: Anything but midots
    -------------------------------------------
    Mood: In Love

    Walking along beneath the lights of that miracle mile
    Me and Mary making our way into the night
    You can hear the cries from the carnival rides
    The pinball bells and the skeeball slides
    Watching the summer sun fall out of sight
    There's a warm wind coming in from off of the ocean
    Making its way past the hotel walls to fill the street
    Mary is holding both of her shoes in her hand
    Said she likes to feel the sand beneath her feet

    And in the morning I'm leaving, making my way back to Cleveland
    So tonight I hope that I will do just fine
    And I don't see how you could ever be anything but mine

    There's a local band playing at the seaside pavilion
    And I got just enough cash to get us in
    And as we're dancin Mary's wrapping her arms around me
    And I can feel the sting of summer on my skin
    In the midst of the music I tell her I love her
    We both laugh cause we know it isn't true
    Ah but Mary there's a summer drawing to an end tonight
    And there's so much that I long to do to you

    But in the morning I'm leaving, making my way back to Cleveland
    So tonight I hope that I will do just fine
    And I don't see how you could ever be anything but mine

    And in the morning I'm leaving, making my way back to Cleveland
    So tonight I hope that I will do just fine
    And I don't see how you could ever be anything but mine

    Mary I don't see how you could ever be anything but mine

    And in the morining I'm leaving making my way back to Cleveland
    So tonight I hope that I will do just fine
    And I don't see how you could ever be anything but mine

    ...Created 2007-01-06 23:29:31

    dotsJournal: New Years Daydots
    -------------------------------------------
    Mood: Lonely

    All is quiet on New Year's Day
    A world in white gets underway
    I want to be with you
    Be with you night and day
    Nothing changes on New Year's Day
    On New Year's Day

    I will be with you again
    I will be with you again

    Under a blood red sky
    A crowd has gathered in black and white
    Arms entwined, the chosen few
    The newspapers says, says
    Say it's true it's true...
    And we can break through
    Though torn in two
    We can be one

    I...I will begin again
    I...I will begin again

    Oh...
    Maybe the time is right
    Oh...maybe tonight...

    I will be with you again
    I will be with you again

    And so we're told this is the golden age
    And gold is the reason for the wars we wage
    Though I want to be with you
    Be with you night and day
    Nothing changes
    On New Year's Day
    On New Year's Day

    ...Created 2007-01-01 18:54:01

    dotsJournal: Last day of mydots
    -------------------------------------------
    Mood: In Love

    I just left Bobby's house
    The service was today.
    Got me thinkin' about how fragile life is,
    As I drove away.
    You know Amy was his only love,
    In a moment she was gone, long gone
    It could have been me or you.
    Oh, baby, there's no time to lose.

    SoI'm gonna bring home a dozen roses,
    And pour us a glass of wine.
    And I'm gonna put on a little music,
    And turn down the lights.
    And I'm gonna wrap my arms around you,
    And rock you all through the night,
    And I'm gonna love you,
    Like it's the last day of my life.

    I drive off when the sun comes up
    I get back when it's gone down.
    There's so much I wanna do with you,
    But I can't be around.
    Whoa, time has been just like a theif,
    It's stolen too much from us,
    So once it's gone we can't make it up.
    So tonight, let's get back in touch.

    I'm gonna bring home a dozen roses,
    And pour us a glass of wine.
    And I'm gonna put on a little music,
    And turn down the lights.
    And I'm gonna wrap my arms around you,
    And rock you all through the night,
    And I'm gonna love you,
    Like it's the last day of my...

    Life is a rainbow, it's a spring snow,
    It's the mornin' dew.
    And I don't wanna waste another minute,
    Without you.

    So I'm gonna bring home a dozen roses,
    And pour us a glass of wine.
    And I'm gonna put on a little music,
    And turn down the lights.
    And I'm gonna wrap my arms around you,
    And rock you all through the night,
    And I'm gonna love you,
    Like it's the last day of my...
    And I'm gonna love you,
    Like it's the last day of my life.
    Oh...


    This is a good song...makes me think of...well you know who...Bradley...kisses~Ashley~

    ...Created 2006-12-29 22:01:19

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