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    dotsJournal: ...dots
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    Mood: Tired

    well, I've just returned from the coast...I was on my vacation for about 2 weeks...and I'm exhausted...almost got a dead sheep award :)

    ...Created 2005-08-10 10:13:00

    dotsJournal: yes!dots
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    Mood: Overwhelmed

    wooooohooo....gonna get drunk..to celebrate me being admitted to the college I wanted...

    heeeeeere comes the poetry !!

    ...Created 2005-07-14 11:34:25

    dotsJournal: study, study...dots
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    Mood: Juggling Tasks

    there are about 3, 4 days to my admission exams...I really must study all day every day of these 4 days and hope 4 the best...

    after that, for those who like some of my work and are wondering where are my new submissions, I will start writing again and submitting...but that also depends if I'll be admitted to 1 of the colleges...
    wish me luck!

    [ gone off to work and study :) ]

    ...Created 2005-07-08 13:04:15

    dotsJournal: Bewildermentdots
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    Mood: Thinking...

    Well, by reading some of the latest poems here, and comments to those poems, I found that people more than often confuse deep with random....
    For example - a good poem, nothin' special but good...
    one or 2 lines at the end of the poem really don't fit
    in the poem...that would be okay if they had their meaning, by which they justify their place in the poem, but it is obvious that the writer had no inspiration and wrote those few lines just to write them...and immediately comments come flooding - 'That was sooo deep!!' - users thinking it's deep just 'cause they don't understand it...

    Don't get me wrong, sometimes almost noone can see how something deep is, but on this example, you can really tell that the words were put for the sake of the rhyme or rhythm...it is really naive to consider it deep.

    I am not an expert, but please, don't just go by the rules that others created...when u comment, if you don't understand, ask...don't just say - 'GREAT, DEEP!'

    ...Created 2005-07-06 14:11:31

    dotsJournal: hmm...dots
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    Mood: Bored

    really bored, i am so bored i entered a writing prompt contest...check it out if you want and submit somethin funny so i wouldn't be so bored...

    ...Created 2005-07-04 13:01:42

    dotsJournal: Damn!dots
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    Mood: Frustrated

    As I've tried to write more poems these days, I never ever finnished one, and I jumbled a whole mess of them...and I musn't be rash and just scribble something random to finnish them just so I can submit them...that would be the worst thing I could do!
    The good thing though...I have started thinking and trying to perceive more stuff in life, and ended up with some, I think, GREAT IDEAS for novels, I can't share them, though. :)

    ...Created 2005-06-25 13:53:50

    dotsJournal: woohoodots
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    Mood: Relaxing

    Well, I have just graduated, and now I have a day or two to completely relax! Yes! I've waited a long time for those 2 days. After that - study, study, study - college ;(
    uff

    ...Created 2005-06-22 12:31:48

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


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