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    dotsJournal: death penaltydots
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    Mood: Thinking...

    Some people question the theory of eye for an eye until it is themselves on the recieving end of that exchange.. Some people uphold the death penalty until one of their close friends or a relative is awating that dreadful day... Some people despise the death penalty until one of their close friends was murdered in cold blood in such a brutal way that it brings ache to your heart to talk about.....

    So its not a question of is it right or is it wrong? The question should be when to use it and when not to use it...

    If someone is guilty, BEYOND RESONABLE DOUBT, of such a heinous crime that deems such a penalty then why not...


    For example: Richard Ramirez.. Some of you have probably heard of him, some of you probably haven't. He was a guy in the mid to late 70's (I think) that broke into peoples homes and malicously murdered them. I read articles of this guy removing breasts from 80 year old women. Somebodys grandmother. I have also read where he broke into a home of a family of 4. A father, A mother, A 12 yr old son, and a 10 yr old daughter. At gun point he tied the latter 3 up raped the daughter and then tied her up. He then raped the son and tied him back up. Then in fron of both kids butchered their parents. After that he then sadistically tortured and killed the little boy and left the daughter for last. The autopsy revealed that her death lasted approx six hours..........

    Now those are just 2 cases of his.. he was convicted for like 13 murders. Things like this happen everyday..

    SO DO YOU THINK I WOULD WANT SOMEBODY LIKE HIM SITTING IN PRISON FOR LIFE, WRITING BOOKS AND DOING DOCUMENTARYS SO HIS FAMILY CAN REEP THE PROFITS. NO! IN FACT HIS ASS IS STILL SITTING ON DEATH ROW IN THE STATE OF CALIFORNIA.

    So you make your own conclusions on the death penalty. I know it's not right to kill. But there has got to be some kind of balance. SERIOUSLY!



    PS I've been in some crazy shit, but everything is kind of coasting now.. so I'm just doing my normal thing. Making money, not working, staying on the mic, and sleeping

    ...Created 2006-06-21 02:54:04

    dotsJournal: dots
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    Mood: The Usual

    im back sorry i been gone so long, it's just that shit is been so hectic lately..

    sooo

    shall we continue where we left off????

    ...Created 2005-11-30 10:15:52

    dotsJournal: Chilleddots
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    Mood: Paranoid

    I just went and seen that emily rose movie.. that is the scariest shit and the most freakiest shit ive ever seen or even heard about in my life.. and to think that its real... man, i just dont know

    ...Created 2005-09-13 23:52:26

    dotsJournal: HAHAHAHAdots
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    Mood: Yeay!!

    roflmao

    Omg my saints beat the patriots lol

    37-27 baby yeahhhhh.. lol for the nonbelievers check out www.nfl.com

    and dont shoot me down, lol might be the only high profile win all year long, and yeah i know its only preseason.. but who cares

    ...Created 2005-08-18 22:32:32

    dotsJournal: RELAXINGdots
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    Mood: Relaxing

    MOVED ON AND UP THE MOUNTAIN CALLED SOCIETY...
    JUST ENJOYING ANOTHER RELAXING DAY
    TILL THAT 7 AM ALARM CLOCK CALLS MY DAMN NAME

    ...Created 2005-08-10 23:28:24

    dotsJournal: SPOKEN FROM MYXdots
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    Mood: The Usual

    Who gives a crap about invalids killing eachother on the streets over drugs and other monstrosities?
    What about all the soldiers out there dying overseas so that you can circle jerk around from porch to porch scribbling this dribble you call poetry?

    Besides, the only ghetto in Louisiana is within New Orleans where I once lived. And even that doesn't even compare to the $hit you really should be thinking about.

    MyX



    IS A COMMENT LEFT BY THE NAME ABOVE, ON MY NEW PIECE WHICH WAS A DEDICATION TO ALL THE PEOPLE THAT HAVE DIED ON THE STREETS,THE INNOCENCE.... JUST FIGURED I'D LET THE PEOPLE WHO LIKE WHAT I WRITE READ IT!!!

    ...Created 2005-08-06 16:44:18

    dotsJournal: just a daydots
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    Mood: The Usual

    today august 1st from 1 pm till as of now 10:20 pm and still going, there is a standdown between a guy barricaded in a house with fbi us marshalls and parish swat along with state police swat, about maybe 5 miles down the road. just a another day in my little "hick" town lol the story is on front page of www.thetowntalk.com

    ...Created 2005-08-01 21:35:17

    dotsJournal: FUELdots
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    Mood: Straightening things out...

    It's what drives the men behind the pens
    To continue doing this shit
    without any amends
    Who gives a shit about a critique?
    I'm bout to make this site gone,
    A fucking antique
    A fire burns inside
    There aint nobody left alive
    Im on a lyrics high
    Fresh outta pills, fresh outta drink
    But these 3 am rants
    make haters think
    What if he did go big?
    I'm gonna be talked about
    at all his gigs??
    I would thank you all
    for the shit you feed me
    Without im nothing,
    nobody would ever belive me
    or my rhyme, cause without something
    to fuel me
    I'm just another fool with talent
    lost in time
    Certain people talk about grammar
    Well I'm to testify about the slammer
    Juvie hall back in the day
    It was swing hard or
    watch what you say
    You all know I got a big mouth
    so i never shut up
    That's why these hands are scared
    cause I learned to buck up
    And feed of the fuel given me
    Cause the rage and fire
    will always live in me!!!!!

    NO MATTER WHO BEGS TO DIFFER
    CAUSE I LISTEN TO NOBODY
    IF YOU DOUBT THEN OPEN
    YOUR FUCKING MOUTH
    YOU'LL FIND OUT WHAT IM ABOUT

    ...Created 2005-07-31 01:45:01

    dotsJournal: George W. bushdots
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    Mood: Thinking...

    The light at the end of the tunnel
    is glowing with every tear they shed
    The will to move on
    is slowly fading away

    Unwillingly will the soldiers give
    they will kill sparingly
    All for their commander in chief


    All destruction is done
    for medals and prestigous valor
    Sands of a foreign land are paradise
    It's their bahamas, their City Park

    Women, kids, and defenseless havens
    are the targets of the brass
    It's so simple for the deskpushers
    to use marines and soldiers to complete
    Their security of their familys next meal

    All because they don't know war
    With votes coming in
    like stray bullets
    they take cover behind Florida voting machines

    "Mr. President, another young soldier was killed"
    "Tell his family he did well
    By securing my next oil well"

    Is this who we voted for?
    I don't think so
    Where is the relief?
    Of having a Bush as
    Commander In Chief

    Listen, this isn't another Michael Moore film
    A "Chief" in this country is the "king"
    no matter what the last name

    Why does the leader strive so much
    to lead another country?
    When the country he's given
    is falling so far behind

    It's a parody of modern government
    We are a joke, worse now than before
    Our Commander in Chief
    is more scared of a Florida vote
    Than he is of a bullet

    All because there are plenty of soldiers
    brainwashed to do what he wishes
    to bend over and take the shot in the ass
    without asking any questions

    It's not their fault
    they are the greatest
    men and women in this country
    They can't help it, if they were built
    to simply kiss Bushs' ass

    What's sad is Bush doesn't even
    have the love of his disposable pawns
    But he continues to use them
    at his will

    We live in this "great country"
    Surronded by these "experts"
    They are making us safe
    I don't buy it
    It's Bushs' puppets with machine guns
    that allow me to sleep good at night

    That's just the way I feel about
    Our Commander In Chief
    and his game of chess
    What about you?

    It's to hard to think about one thing
    When you try to point out
    Blemishes in a big "white house"
    It's just not possible

    So with the lines of marines
    getting more by the minute
    and the voting machines getting rigged
    for good ole Jeb
    Sit back and pray to god
    Get ready for your next
    Commander In Chief


    By dylanpoe

    this is one of my brothers old posts, i like it and figured that id display it

    ...Created 2005-07-23 00:54:08

    dotsJournal: QUESTIONS?!?!?dots
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    Mood: Thinking...

    can you breathe?
    can you live life to the fullest?
    can you be extreme?
    can you find someone who loves you?
    can you find someone who hates you?
    can you commit a crime?
    can you let out a sigh?
    can you tell a lie?
    can you read?
    can you type?
    if so then write a fucking comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    ...Created 2005-07-21 18:19:11

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


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