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    Mood: Relaxing

    Check out Shadow Dance, that may be my favorite poem I've ever written.

    ...Created 2007-10-02 15:30:18

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    Mood: Head Aching

    hey guys, while you're here, I want you to check out 30 seconds of someday, that's still new and I want to know what you think of it.

    ...Created 2005-05-09 20:31:56

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    Mood: Guess what!?

    hey guys, read my new poem, it's not bad if I do say so myself, well, at least the guy I wrote it about likes it.

    ...Created 2005-05-05 22:03:49

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    Mood: The Usual

    Hey Everybody, I'm feeling pretty good. Still "suffering" from the effects of venom from the bite of the infamous love bug. So I almost got fired from my job the other day. Kind of an interesting story really. A poem I put on this very site somehow was accessed by a certain district manager of the ice cream store where I work. Oops. Awkward, very awkward. The moral here is to watch what you put online. Although, at least the guy said it was well-written during the scare. Anyway, I haven't really had the inspiration to write anything new lately, but I have a feeling something's coming this week. If you're new here and want to check things out, I'd really recommend "Chemistry", "acrostic", and one of my comedy poems. Sorry about the lack of my old ice cream store poem. I had to take it down for the good of the company. But hopefully you all will go on without it.

    ...Created 2005-01-09 20:56:49

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    Mood: Dead Sexy

    That's right guys, I'm feeling dead sexy, and you know why? Because I'm in love. It happened incredibly fast, but it's there and it's better than anything. I mean, this guy is incredible, attractive, intelligent, and he's just everything. But what does he want more than anything? Me. So that's why I'm feeling dead sexy. There really isn't much more to say other that WOW. Anyway, in case you want to know a little something more about this, because you're nosy or just interested for some reason, check out my poem "Chemistry".

    ...Created 2004-12-31 05:41:12

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    Mood: Straightening things out...

    Hey guys, if any of you have recieved comments from me, you know I like to be thoughrow(how in the hell do you spell that word???) with my opinions, because I myself don't like hearing the same thing over and over again, and I really do like it when someone suggests change. I mean, that's what this site is for, right? So that we can all improve as writers with the help of other writers? So if any of you guys get pissed off for my suggesting some change in a piece, know that it's not personal, and it's just my opinion. And putting your stuff up here means that you should be open to any sort of comment, not just "great job, keep up the good work". And is that really what you want to keep hearing in the first place? Maybe, I don't know. But if my comments have offended you in any way, then I apologize, but I hope maybe in the future you'll be able to be a little less sensitve about a persons critique, when you ask to be critiqued. That is all.

    ...Created 2004-12-04 16:00:09

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    Mood: Rant

    Ok, let me start by telling you that I work in a little ice cream store that's a chain around here. I have worked there for a year and a half now, which if any of you have worked for near-minimum wage food service, you know is quite a bit. I mean, only after working here have I really become aware of how STUPID society in general is. Let me give you a few rules if you come to my store:
    1. Do not order blizzards, mcflurries, or any other novelty item that is definitely not from our store. Read the sign, it does not say dairy queen.
    2. Do not point at the menu or a certain item and say you want "that". I unfortunately cannot read minds and therefore do not know what "that" is. So don't get pissed off if I can't figure it out right away.
    3. Ok, here's an example: Me-Would that be all for you?
    Customer-yes, that would be all
    Me-(a few minutes later after having made a shake) Alright, there you are, your total will be $3.84.
    Customer-Ok, I'd also like two more shakes...
    Please tell me you can figure out what's wrong with that. Anyway, that's just a few things off the top of my head and maybe you can understand that I have at least put up with my fair share of shit including unreasonably unruly customers and employees that have come and gone while I remain doing my best to be a goood little worker who people tend to take advantage of by faking sick so I get called ready to accept their hours or cover when someone decides to take a half hour break, just because I let them. There is also a similarity here to my outside-of-work life, but I'll try and get to that later.
    Ok, so if I've spent a year and a half doing the best I can, then why is it that people that have only been there for 6 months get to make more money than me? Kids my age who I initially helped train get promoted while I stay at the same salary for 9 months. This has happened twice and is really testing my tolerance as far as how much can I take before I simply must leave in a rage. I guess that on top of my coming ready to work for seven hours despite feeling like my head could've exploded, did not help.
    My life is starting to feel so mundane: I wake up, I go to school, I work, I sleep, I wake up...it's a constant cycle of blah. I mean, I don't have time to go out with the friends that only seem to care enough to talk to me at school if I initiate conversation. My relationship life...yech.
    After a while of being pursued by a few guys that never really knew me that well in the first place, they seem to have found some other pretty thing to look at and chase. Which is ok I guess, either way I'm stuck with no one who really gives a shit about what I think or feel, and how I really feel like I need someone to really care about me so badly that it hurts. I can't say that I've ever been in a realationship that lived up to all I wanted in a relationship. I've been in plenty with guys just because it seemed like either I should be with them or I'd be with nobody which seemed like worse than anything, since I always hated being alone. So, there were a few relationships involving no real feelings on my part. I felt something really strongly for someone once, and it seemed to work for a while at least, but, and I suppose it serves me right, he didn't really care about me. So while I'm still partly nursing that wound, I'm lonely and convinced that I am uncapable of happiness.
    Ok, don't get me wrong, I should by all accounts be happy. Nothing really bad has ever happened to me, at least not compared to other people. I don't have to worry about anything really. My parents can afford to give me a very comfortable life. I'm not stricken with a terminal illness. I'm not beaten or sexually molested or anything like that. Yet, I'm inexplicably miserable. If there is a god, may he pardon my ungrateful soul.
    On the somewhat bright side, I do have at least one friend that seems to share many of my exact same problems who I take try to take solace in. He's a great sport really for having to put up with all my ranting and raving. Yeah, I know, a "he" right, my realationship problems could all be over. Incorrect. He's a friend of a friend of mine who moved a while back, about 4 states away. Which is sort of too bad, because he's cute too. Tough luck. Anyway, I wish I could get my creative juices flowing and write some good poetry for this huge writing portfolio due this friday, but it's not looking good. I seem to only have the energy to complain. Typical.

    ...Created 2004-11-28 20:05:52

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


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