Rain Baby
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Posted by: frenchie_inlove
ebflannery Wins!
Creator Notes
This poem truly had meaning to it. It was very deep, and i could tell the writer had put a lot of effort and though into this poem. Especially love. This poem really got to my heart.
Raine Baby
Raine Baby, do not cry
I am here with you
The skies may storm,
Lightening flash,
But you are safe, with me
Dry your tears,
Revel in the splendor
Of the cleansing of the heavens
And remember, when it pours
The angels are giving their gift
So the flowers can grow
For you alone
My Blooming Queen,
My daughterSelf Critique
Abstract
About your thoughts when you read the words "Rain baby"
Details
should have lots of details and write about your thoughts when you read the words "Rain Baby." It needs to come out of your heart believable.
Conditions
*only your thoughts and words
*must be a secret which poem is yours
*Must be a poem you came up for just for this contest
* Can not be posted on your elite before the contest ends.
Prize
simple as GOOD LUCK!
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Beautiful Babies in Water
Rain Baby…
Words t...
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I'm trying hard to see a rain baby
I'm closing my eyes<...
Rain emphasize my Pain
It was yesterday the rain...
Rain, Baby
Rain, baby, rain.
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Energy ...
Standing by the window
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The Clearest Cloudy Nights I Watch You In
Oh these clear skies cry ...
rainy days
spring days are my favori...
One Moment
On moment like no other...
Raine Baby
Raine Baby, do not cry
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