--Elite Writer Alias: Aaron Felix Name: John Doe ASL: 17/m/USA Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 0 Life Story: Pretty Much. [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 1 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 1136 D 3.11 Years 0.31 Decades 37.87 Months 162.29 Weeks 1.13600e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: "The universe is a big place. Perhaps the biggest." -Kurt Vonnegut
I doubt you lack the articulateness to comment on my poems! I like any kind of feedback, doesn't matter what it is. I just like seeing it how other people see it, because it is hard for me to see because I am wrapped up too thoroughly in my own head. Also, I am really confused as to why my little comment boxes are missing. Maybe I haven't reciprocated enough? Maybe I will spend the day at work tomorrow critiquing peoples work and see if that solves the problem.
Thankyou for reading all my poems. I would really like to hear your comments on them though. maybe if the box reappears you will have something to say about them?
You pinned down my style pretty well. I've studied the surrealists and imagists at great lenght, in school and in my own time. I also am a huge bukowski fan, but I don't know if that shows. Just watched "born into this" a doc on him. I recommend definitely picking that up. He says a lot of profound stuff in there.
Its very flattering what you said and affirms that I should keep on it, so thankyou.
-Wendy
Don't restrain yourself then.
But I feel like you're assuming something that I didn't mean to say.
Nobody lost. I'm not any closer to you or God than before I wrote any of those things.
If it means anything, though... I don't want to lose you. I just don't know how to go about keeping it from happening, because so far everything I've done... is just making things worse.
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