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Name: Maiaaa Masquerade
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Above Tokyo

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And there I was, perched above the cityscape as the blinding neon lights shone their brightest and the deafening sounds of cars and sirens echoed throughout the hills. Below me were thousands of people ; strangers that were somehow unknowingly linked to one another. Their eyes filled with every emotion in the book that I can never read. To think that these people would never second guess that there are others like them. They always seem to think that they are the only one of their kind. It just goes to show how little minded we can be, but that's besides the point.

I began to walk around the edge of the roof, wondering if anyone was there to stop me, not that I was going to do anything stupid. I just wanted to see if someone cared enough to do so. Nothing. No one. Then it hit me. Is there anyone out there, parents and family memembers aside, that cared so much for one person that a single drop of their blood and the smallest hesitation of their breath enraged them so much as to hunt a person down and make them regret it? And I don't mean a person who uses that drop of blood or that hesitation as an excuse to show strength. Is there anyone out there, out of millions and billions of God's children that cared that much for one single, solitary, imperfect, sinful person in a world of lies and disappointments?

Perhaps maybe, that one single person is their proof, a contridiction, to every forsaken and shattered hope that there is still a bit of good in the world.

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i just wanted the initial image to change after realizing that it's not their own right hand or left but someone else's. I intended a frantic/fear/action-kinda lyk scene. Somewhat lyk she took flight n rested against a wall. lol..imagination...
| Posted on 2008-12-09 20:54:24 | by Jaiknob - [ Reply to This ] -
I actually thought it was very nice, i dont think any chnges needed!

| Posted on 2008-11-12 15:25:30 | by BusterLILblock - [ Reply to This ] -
Thanks for the comments!
| Posted on 2008-11-09 19:34:32 | by Blackphoenix14 - [ Reply to This ] -
Hey thanks 4 ur commnt on Turntables...the last part was to make it clear taht i'm talkin' 'bout the devil trying to get u down...buh u aren't teh only one hu sed it's better i'm removin' it...thanks...
| Posted on 2008-11-09 01:42:11 | by Jaiknob - [ Reply to This ] -
Thanks for the comment on "Make it better with a kiss".
| Posted on 2007-07-02 14:12:38 | by DBE - [ Reply to This ] -
thanks for your comment, i will take your ideas into account next time... :)
| Posted on 2007-03-29 21:57:57 | by iscreamicry - [ Reply to This ] -

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