thanks AE for checking on my work. Im afraid theres no alarm clock in my poem to ring but I like that youre encouraging me to consider using more rhyming in the piece. The structure is pretty much null, no good format. thanks again.
Thank you for your thoughts on the little things we share. It may sound a bit hallmark but when I wrote it it was in the middle of a bunch of really down poems that really had a bad tone to them. I guess it was my way of trying to get out of that mode. thank you for your thoughts. I appreciate them always.