hey ive been reading through sum of your poetry...and i cant help but 2 assume that you are a rapper..? ...if not, that may sound funny 2 you, but..well, the reason i ask is because i am a rapper. the way that you put your rhymes 2gether is very smooth, and is a technique that many (of the skilled) emcee's look 2 achieve. if this is the case..then i am very interested in hearing your music, heres my myspace...(its not a music profile but i do have some of my songs on it, just click on the soundclick players.) (ignore the first song please lol)
oh..and do me a favor and check out some of my poetry and tell me what you think (ive only posted 3 so far..im new 2 the site).
It was natural.. I've been having a really hard time producing anything satisfactory to me and the past couple of days have been [censored]. That was just what I would say if she'd listen and it happened to come out in rhyme.
Thank you for your comment on "Words." Yes, I'm not overly fond of non-rhyming poems either but every once in awhile it seems to fit. Unfortunately, not letting the person go isn't an option- the poem is about my loss of him.