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    Name: Akili -chan
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    "The Pedestrian And The Volkswagen" by Ron Cole
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    .. Happy birthday Bonnie! The only reason I know of this is because it's on GAFF.

    And happy unbirthday to everyone else because I don't know when your birthdays are ;


    *too lazy to look them up right now*


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    Thank you for your comments on "Show Your Broken Teeth" and "Sodomizing Gomorrah". I am happy with your feedback and analysis. Not many people have ever enjoyed my strange prose, or narrative style. The show your broken teeth line is about how much emphasis society puts on the need to have perfect beauty. I also agree that Gomorrah was choppy. It was written in haste. Anyway I have 2 new entries if you would like to check them out. Again I appreciate your feedback.
    | Posted on 2008-05-24 16:01:12 | by jayisademon - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Akili, thank you for coming by, and for leaving comments on "The Pedestrian And The Volkswagen", and for adding it to your favorites!

    "The Pedestrian And The Volkswagen" was based on an old joke, which I had fun converting in to a poetry "spoof"!!
    | Posted on 2008-05-23 09:28:17 | by Ron Cole - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hmm?... No problem ^-^
    | Posted on 2008-05-16 10:12:34 | by Katlord - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the comment. It spurred me to look at some of your poems, and they are very good.

    Thanks as well for the new reading material.
    | Posted on 2008-05-13 20:04:44 | by Nathaufein - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I only put the bolded parts because I wanted it to be childish and silly. She is always getting on me for growing up to fast. So I rewrote an old poem I made as a child. Anyway thanks for the comment.
    | Posted on 2008-05-13 11:18:13 | by Katlord - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    He he, thankies, Akili!!!!
    | Posted on 2008-05-12 22:06:30 | by Krazy - [ Reply to This ] -



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