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    Journal: broken
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    Mood: Sad
      
    my tears mean nothing anymore. and my pain goes unheard. i am brushed to the side and replaced with unsurmountable things. how am i supposed to make a change when nothing makes a difference?


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     Grey Skies and Lousy Goodbyes
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     Regret Me Never
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     Squeeze my Hand if you Understand
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    ::Longing : Class : Misc :
     The Reality of a New Addiction
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     Without A Reason To Look Through You
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    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     And So I Wait
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     Bottom of the Sea
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    ::Alone : Class : Poetry :
     Cold Like Rain
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     Unveiled
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    ::The pain inside : Class : Poetry :
     This Void
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    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     Okay, So You Don't Aprrove....
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    ::Angry : Class : Poetry :
     Physique Technique
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    ::Serious : Class : Poetry :
     Lips To Melt For
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    ::Romance : Class : Poetry :
     I Wont Stay at Your Feet
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     You're Not a Yesterday Anymore
    :|| V: 748 | C: 7 ||:
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     Inner-Self Starvation
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     Let This Be My Last Mistake
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    ::Sorry : Class : Poetry :
     A Love Not Returned
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     In Reguards of Your Foolishness
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     To Whom it May Concern:
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    Thanks for the comment on 'Spring Sunset'. You're right about the last 5th stanza, I don't really know what I was trying to do. But thank you for your critiques. I will use them. :D

    Annie
    | Posted on 2009-01-26 03:08:12 | by unnamedtear - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    | Posted on 2008-11-30 04:39:32 | by meoww - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    well, i guess i am a forgetful lump, haha.

    that poem was written over a year ago for my ex, if you must know ie the goddess i'm speaking of... we had an argument over something silly... and that poem was born. all of it is true. achingly so.
    thank you for your time and thoughts.
    | Posted on 2008-11-27 09:17:14 | by meoww - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    You're welcome.

    - A.I.M
    | Posted on 2008-11-27 04:23:01 | by AIM - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey, thanks for the comment! I'm glad you could find your own little bit of meaning inside it, and I'll take your suggestions into mind next time I write something.

    | Posted on 2007-10-22 16:02:37 | by Zai - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi Amber,

    Just wanna thank you on your comment "Wasting air to be your motivator". I'm glad i was able to keep you till the ending of the piece. It was a very personal one for me and i was afraid people wouldn't understand where i was coming from.

    thanks again for your thoughts. It meant a lot.

    Cheers,

    Irina
    | Posted on 2007-10-22 12:37:26 | by charmedidentity - [ Reply to This ] -



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