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    Journal: About a Poem
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    Mood: Thinking...
      
    About Broken Glass Dreams:

    there is a fair bit of past stories behind the piece, the poem in general though, is based on one of my friends. Some things to explain behind the pieces are about him, broken-glass-blue eyes (the colour he was told his eyes were) and we'd often talk of dreams, and in particular of the white wolf he'd often dream at...he was a guy who'd work his way into everyones heart, with his kindness and selflessness, but unfortunately a couple weeks ago he commited suicide and hung himself in his barn. So there was a lot of hurt involved with my group of friends as we all lost someone important to us. But he lived his own life, and even though there will always be regrets we've gotta understand that life goes on by you no matter how hard you try to turn back time and undo things. However, there are always dreams.


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    Thank you for stopping by and reading Morning Frost. I'll think on the "virgin rays" but not sure what to use to replace for early morning sun rays. If you think of anything let me know. I appreciate you stopping by. Glad to see you came back around to visit.
    jaycee
    | Posted on 2016-01-29 16:09:47 | by jaycee - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thank you for stopping by! i wasn't really posting it so much for critique as i was just making it known. if i decide to do an edit, i'll take your thoughts to heart. thanks :)
    | Posted on 2013-03-08 22:10:21 | by etheror - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    That observation made me tear up, how easily I forget myself some days. Forget that "silver lining" dispite circumstance principle. Thanks for commenting.
    | Posted on 2013-02-20 12:43:30 | by lori_tab - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for your kind words on my poem about Uncle Gaston. I had edited it but not posted up the amendments as yet. I'll do that now.

    " Yes I enjoyed the personal touch of this piece. I think it will always amaze me that there are ways for emotions to transferred into words. Creating emotion again with a few movements of the fingers.

    I think one thing I would change is to get rid of the "&"'s and replace them with the actual word 'and' for consistencies sake.

    I think one thing I'm glad I didn't completely glance over was your description. I do not know what it would be like to have a soul pass form a body as you hold them; 'curious and intimate' hold quite some depth to them though, and I'm glad you wrote that little sentence as well."
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    Hey Fellow Edmontonian,

    No I don't know any good spots right now. but Ill check out your work
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