Angel_SinName: Dorian Gray ASL: F Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 5070 Life Story: A Tragi- Vaudeville [ Ignore User ] Favorites: 0 Forum Posts: 2 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 5831 D 15.98 Years 1.6 Quote: “He not busy being born is busy dying"by B. Dylan |
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...Created 2008-03-18 16:17:41 [ View Past Journals ]
A new day, there before me, immutable
another day between my uncertain future and I
Dreams, more dreams, flowing without end, ineffable
Tomorrow, I will change, I will be better, I will go far
There, there, everything will be fine. I promise
Shh, Don't be afraid. You will not get crushed
another day between my uncertain future and I
Dreams, more dreams, flowing without end, ineffable
Tomorrow, I will change, I will be better, I will go far
There, there, everything will be fine. I promise
Shh, Don't be afraid. You will not get crushed
...Created 2008-03-18 16:17:41 [ View Past Journals ]
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| wow...you got all that from my poem?
i usually have no idea what i am on about until i have reread it a few times. i tend to churn these out in seconds and then go, "Hmmm...i wonder what i meant by that." i'm flattered that you thought so much of it. :) |
| | Posted on 2008-03-24 01:15:53 | by ruejacobs - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| i hadn't recognised the angel_sin...but when i clicked and read Dorian Gray there on the page...
i remembered you and i said to myself, "oh...no wonder that poem was so good!!!" lol |
| | Posted on 2008-03-17 21:33:31 | by ruejacobs - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| Thanks for your comment on "A fox, red and lustrous".
What's wrong with the word multiply? It's earthy! Unfortunately, math stole it from the earth. I'm not sure if I should change it. |
| | Posted on 2007-10-12 06:49:17 | by manwithnoname - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| thanx for your comment on 'dream[less] strangers' i love watching the way you put my pieces together with your thoughts
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| | Posted on 2007-08-01 04:28:25 | by Someones Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| i adore your comment.
i wrote that piece to explore how i was feeling verses how i [and everyone else] thought i should be feeling after being beaten and raped in a foreign country... i had put it into perspective very quickly and it didnt really shatter me like its apparently sposed to. hence broken feels like whole... funnily enough... by the time i got home from travelling [i refused to go home mid adventure] i was completely okay with the whole thing but my friend MADE me go to counselling. so i went. and i took when broken feels like whole. and broke it down. line by line. image by image. intention by intention. and the counsellor decided to believe that i was, infact, completely fine with the whole thing and didnt make me go back lol. thank you for your most wonderful comment. i especially love the idea of god and mondays being light and dark |
| | Posted on 2007-07-30 04:24:53 | by Someones Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| sometimes the best comments are the ones that ramble and hardly say anything lol. i like that piece too... thanx. |
| | Posted on 2007-07-28 00:33:45 | by Someones Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] - |
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