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    Hi glad to make your aquintance. And thanks for the kind comments Greatly appreciated on... Time was born.
    I actually tried to keep the wording flowing but somehow the imaginary ended abruptly as if it was interrupted for some reason.
    This matter of thoughts comes from my subconscious mind and flows like a current carrying these images that ends in visualizations of the Deep that I cannot always explain nor put in comprehensible wording of any format. I have no trouble “to understand it and relate to it” but how can I put it in sensible words?
    I can see the Aura of people or anything on earth. I can visualize abstract images but cannot share it because there is not method by which it can be accomplished.
    Books I read about this phenomenon were the Toltec Teachings by T. Mares from: The Mists of Dragon Lore Book Three. I have studied all of his books on the Toltec teachings. Mind bending!
    Very comprehensive The World of Sorcerers chapters and further on the Sorcerers Explanation chapter from sayd boo 3. quite interesting. He wrote 4 books if I remember correctly. They are with my daughter at the moment. You have to study them while still young because it takes more than one life time to get the sense of it. In one of his books he explains Cavalry by way of Toltec Teaching that I find extraordinary beautiful.
    I truly appreciate your comments because it is seldom that I can share with such a deep a mind that can comprehend the unseen worlds of a magnitude unmanageability Deep and wide and bottomless as eternity is as you can comprehend. My daughters understand me because we are studying the same principles. The eldest is Beulah also on ES by that name. Well all for now and will check you out. Pardon my English I am Afrikaans but I try. Blessed Be. Joachim.
    | Posted on 2008-09-02 19:01:10 | by Joachim - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for the comment, it brought a smile to this old (16) face.

    And as for Azerjan...give me an offering of a blond 18 year old, well built male every six weeks and the Ministry of Defense shall be appeased.
    | Posted on 2008-09-02 03:28:40 | by Max Million - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the feedback on Along the Way. And yes, the poem is about simply slowing down to see life. Whether it be roses or people, it's all the same.

    I tend to right in a very child-like manner (I prefer child-like to childish)-complicated words serve no purpose in my writing. It's all about simplicity. Think about it: children have such a wonderful view of the world. It's only when we become adults that the world changes and becomes much darker and colder...IMO, the world hasn't changed - we have :)
    | Posted on 2007-11-20 13:57:24 | by krs3332003 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    My friend thanks you for your comment on "Book Worm"
    point in fact, this was an assignment for English and well, despite being on this site, I am not all that good at writing poems. So, it was not a race.
    AS for the end of the poem, we also had to write a "tale" this person would tell if this person were in a group with us in our own version of the Canterbury Tales by Chaucer.
    "thanks for the advice." says he

    ~Arev
    | Posted on 2006-10-24 00:00:00 | by Arev - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanx for the enthusiastic comment...i mean it.
    teehee.
    | Posted on 2006-10-06 00:00:00 | by PoeticNonsense - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for the comment on Loneliness Crashing Down.

    And I'm aware that its not always bad to be lonely. I've always believed in the necessity of yin-yang principles. You cannot know happiness without understanding sadness, and vice versa. You cannot feel loved and surrounded without being alone as well. Loneliness Crashing Down was probably written about one of the times when I just felt it overwhelming, like being drowned in the sensation of isolation. Once again, thank you.
    | Posted on 2006-10-04 00:00:00 | by CynicalxDreamer - [ Reply to This ] -



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