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    Journal: Exhaustion
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    Mood: Juggling Tasks
      
    It is nearly time to go to work. Work I love, but exhaustion I am not as fond of. Exhaustion is something that sleep cannot cure, that eating right cannot remedy, and that drags on your mind, making it useless. It stiffles laughter, comfort, calmness, and creativity-- a culmination of the leftover sludge of being busy, of being wrung dry and tossed to an anxious world every day. Nope. I got seven hours in last night, and my exhaustion isn't going anywhere.


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    Thanks for stopping by "Crawl Crush". I appriciate your advice. I can see how that poem of mine in particular might be hard for some people to grasp. The title refers to going to a pub crawl on Halloween. At first I called it "Pub Crawl Crush" but then I changed it. Maybe I'll change it back (perhaps that would help clarify aspects of it). But for now I'm still undecided. The whole "hooking up" thing is pretty acurate on your part--except it's more like an almost hook-up but then the speaker thinking better of it because the she feels she'd be selling herself short if she did that. I don't want to explain all my thoughts though.

    I agree with what your poetry teacher is saying to some extent, but I also think that if you just spell everything out, then why not just write a story? Or better yet, a non-fiction article of some kind. Poetry, for me, is about evoking emotions and images for people and then letting them take away whatever meaning they come away from it with. Like art work. Or song lyrics. I mean, sometimes a song tells a completely cohesive story, but most of the time it gives to phrases to ponder, ideas to mull over etc. And the rest is left up to the listener. Does that make sense?

    Anyway, I do truly thank you for stopping by that poem. I'd love for you to check out some of my other stuff as well! I will surely return the favor!

    Jane
    | Posted on 2011-11-06 00:24:25 | by JanePlane - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    yes, i have seen that...about time we have some protests...

    good poem...

    visit my page sometime...

    thanks

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-10-12 11:37:53 | by jacoberin - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    A year or two ago u left a response to my poem a crush I never had ... That comment inspired me to start writing again .. Thank u so much for your critique & I know I'm super late but I will be checking out your work !!
    | Posted on 2011-09-15 08:11:13 | by KiHoodie - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hi there.

    thanks so much for stopping by and leaving words on mine. i appreciate it.
    i'll think about removing the parts that took away. everything is subject to change. yes? the piece is ages old. a kind of reminder to self that things aren't the way they used to be.

    anyhoo...

    thank you.
    | Posted on 2011-08-29 18:15:05 | by isabella - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed my goofy story.
    | Posted on 2011-06-01 10:45:55 | by hyproglo - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Don't feel bad . I get that a lot .
    Bruce
    | Posted on 2011-05-27 03:38:33 | by monad - [ Reply to This ] -



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