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    Journal: Wow
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    Mood: I won!
      
    Wow I have succesfully altered my dreams consciously.
    Though it will take a while until I can do it reliably.



    ...Created 2006-05-29 11:51:04     [ View Past Journals ]

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     Book worm
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    ::Satire : Class : Poetry :
     Face Me
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    ::Passion : Class : Poetry :
     Theatrically Fickle Lovers
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    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     IDK what to name this piece
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    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Eleven for the Run, One for the Stay
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    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Life is like Gum
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     Three Day WeeKeNd
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     Fire
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     The Nine
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     God
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     My Promise
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    ::Serious : Class : Poetry :
     Frantic Search
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     Don't Ring!
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     Falling Shoes
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     Bubbles?
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    ::Angry : Class : Poetry :
     Turmoil
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    ::Depressed : Class : Poetry :
     Playful Wind in Her Hair
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     Trash Hsart
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     She is like Chocolate
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     Chicken Soup and Tests
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    Haha oh well that's OK. You should come on more though, because if you can write things like "Book Worm" I'd be fully interested in a good read!!

    Thanks for taking time to reply to me anyway,

    Cya
    | Posted on 2007-01-24 06:28:39 | by Axestasy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi I read "Book Worm" and loved it, but I don't seem to be able to comment on it for some reason. But anyway the style of writing in that poem is exactly the way I would have written a descriptive poem like that. Alot of the time when I try to write I TRY to develop lines like the ones in Book Worm, and try to make each line flow like yours do. I'm really impressed and it's going in my favs!
    | Posted on 2007-01-13 07:08:03 | by Axestasy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hello again,

    You're welcome for the comments. I'm glad I could be of some assistance. As for your beliefs, I suppose respect for humanity and life is more important than knowledge of the unknown.

    Have a good day,

    DeepDreamer2008
    | Posted on 2006-10-27 00:00:00 | by DeepDreamer2008 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi,

    Thank you for the comment on the comment "Private practises". I'm sorry i haven't been able to reply earlier but it's pretty hard for me to get the computer on weekends.

    Still, i wanted to thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts....

    Take care....

    ~Irina
    | Posted on 2006-10-02 00:00:00 | by charmedidentity - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your comment on my poem Man's Laughter. On my line about white shirts showing blood well, it has the meaning you guessed, but was also intented to be slightly personal to myself because i own only one white shirt and it is a shirt made my spyderco knife company that says "think about it all of God's creatures have knives" but the rest of my shirts are black... and i wear black shirts because they DON'T show blood... so i happened to get into a fight with three "gangster" kids the other day... i am a martial artist and this was my victory poem. though i truly don't condone killing in this sense for the law would come to lock me up, but they were bloodied up and their white shirts shown the blood really well... like a painting... and i was inspired. that was a bit long but it answers your question right? and your other question about me telling (lecturing) people to kill for the beauty, you hit that one right on it's head. thank you for the comment, i am glad you liked it. enjoy
    | Posted on 2006-09-29 00:00:00 | by Old - [ Reply to This ] -



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