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Hi I read "Book Worm" and loved it, but I don't seem to be able to comment on it for some reason. But anyway the style of writing in that poem is exactly the way I would have written a descriptive poem like that. Alot of the time when I try to write I TRY to develop lines like the ones in Book Worm, and try to make each line flow like yours do. I'm really impressed and it's going in my favs!
Thank you for your comment on my poem Man's Laughter. On my line about white shirts showing blood well, it has the meaning you guessed, but was also intented to be slightly personal to myself because i own only one white shirt and it is a shirt made my spyderco knife company that says "think about it all of God's creatures have knives" but the rest of my shirts are black... and i wear black shirts because they DON'T show blood... so i happened to get into a fight with three "gangster" kids the other day... i am a martial artist and this was my victory poem. though i truly don't condone killing in this sense for the law would come to lock me up, but they were bloodied up and their white shirts shown the blood really well... like a painting... and i was inspired. that was a bit long but it answers your question right? and your other question about me telling (lecturing) people to kill for the beauty, you hit that one right on it's head. thank you for the comment, i am glad you liked it. enjoy