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Hi and thanks for your comments. This poem is still a work in progress and though I want to shift gears toward the end...I am still not satisfied. I will consider your comments as I rework. In the mean time thank you for taking time to read.
cowboy, i just got to read your put down of one of my compositions from 2007 titled, "war Prayeries".you certainly have a right to your opinions, and to express them however errant and/or misconceived though they are.i still admire you for at least commenting after giving it what little time or respect that you could.i'm only trying to be as novel as i can and to push the envelope as they say, by making more of some words or terms so to give them a new life and future that they might not other wise have, but not for i.please do check out the last recent five after being absent for nearly 3 years, or if you don't, won't, or can't, your explainations or excuses are also welcome.until we are by fate brought together again, so long cowboy.Regis Rex Deutsche Konig, Karlz
"Thanks for yourcomments re 'a Christmas Poem 2' You are probably right but we can dream and hope.---You would of likely got more out of 'A Christmas Poem #1'---Mugs---
Predictable? Is my work not original? I don't want to feel like I have copied someone else....
anyways, thanks for the comment. I really appreciate it. your thoughts are always welcome!! and i will definetely think about what you said....or wrote...lol...