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    Journal: Sacrifices
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    Mood: The Usual
      
    What are you willing to sacrifice for the one you love? Or are you willing to sacrifice anything? Are you the type to sit idle by and watch your lover go through trial after trial that you have set up for them? I wander though, to those of you who do, what is the meaning of love to you? Is it the view of a fool that believes his/her love should sacrifice to show true devotion? I wander for these type of people is there any real true love in the world? On that same thought I wander if there is any true love out there for any of us poor unlucky folks. When your lover cries, and your listening how does that make you feel? Do you feel annoyed or angry? Do you just not care at all? Do you feel out of place and strange? Or do you feel their pain and do everything in your power to make them feel better? Every day when you wake up and spend time together, what do you talk about? Do you talk about your day? friends? life events? weather? or do you just feel comfortable sitting in silence and mouthing an 'i love you' every now and then. What is it that convinces people that they have found 'the one' some are convinced as soon as they see the person that this is it, thats their soul-mate, no question about it! Well those people are CRAZY, you cant judge a person the first time you see them, or for damn sure you don't know they are the one. I believe that the point that you realize this special person in your life is the one, you realize what you are willing to give up to be with them. So with that in mind i return to my beginning question does true love mean you would sacrifice anything? Can there be true love for one, and not another? Can one be truly happy knowing that they have given up everything for love while the weights on the scales are not equal. This i do not know, but isn't true love worth all the sacrifice? Isn't it worth all the trials you must endure, even if it is to amuse the others sick little games? If your true happiness is being with the one that you truly love and living happily ever after, isn't it worth a few monsters in the closet?


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    Thanks for you nice comment on "Gag" it ME smile lol :) I will be commenting on your work as well-

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    | Posted on 2011-09-22 02:24:10 | by AltheaLaochra - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi there- glad you liked my poem about my gf. Take care.
    | Posted on 2011-09-12 17:01:24 | by tjsmith5 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks so much for your comment on Hypnotized. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
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    | Posted on 2011-09-12 06:13:32 | by dancer-of-words - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi thanks for the comms on the winter poem Mr. Shakespeare I think will like it too. Regards joachim
    | Posted on 2011-09-09 21:21:21 | by Joachim - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    And sometimes that person you can't please is a stunning reflection of you. And you can never be content until the day you die.

    Thanks for the comment!
    | Posted on 2011-09-09 19:21:24 | by OneDarkFlame92 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thank you on "the sun seems lower" piece....glad it could have that effect on you.

    jacob
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