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    Journal: Sacrifices
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    Mood: The Usual
      
    What are you willing to sacrifice for the one you love? Or are you willing to sacrifice anything? Are you the type to sit idle by and watch your lover go through trial after trial that you have set up for them? I wander though, to those of you who do, what is the meaning of love to you? Is it the view of a fool that believes his/her love should sacrifice to show true devotion? I wander for these type of people is there any real true love in the world? On that same thought I wander if there is any true love out there for any of us poor unlucky folks. When your lover cries, and your listening how does that make you feel? Do you feel annoyed or angry? Do you just not care at all? Do you feel out of place and strange? Or do you feel their pain and do everything in your power to make them feel better? Every day when you wake up and spend time together, what do you talk about? Do you talk about your day? friends? life events? weather? or do you just feel comfortable sitting in silence and mouthing an 'i love you' every now and then. What is it that convinces people that they have found 'the one' some are convinced as soon as they see the person that this is it, thats their soul-mate, no question about it! Well those people are CRAZY, you cant judge a person the first time you see them, or for damn sure you don't know they are the one. I believe that the point that you realize this special person in your life is the one, you realize what you are willing to give up to be with them. So with that in mind i return to my beginning question does true love mean you would sacrifice anything? Can there be true love for one, and not another? Can one be truly happy knowing that they have given up everything for love while the weights on the scales are not equal. This i do not know, but isn't true love worth all the sacrifice? Isn't it worth all the trials you must endure, even if it is to amuse the others sick little games? If your true happiness is being with the one that you truly love and living happily ever after, isn't it worth a few monsters in the closet?


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    thank you...glad it could give you a smile.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-04-16 00:58:10 | by jacoberin - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for your comment on my piece "I have your key"
    Ash
    | Posted on 2011-02-24 11:53:11 | by AshleyRox1 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi!

    Thanks for the comment on "One Breath". I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
    | Posted on 2011-02-23 22:46:34 | by Santi - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I actually find them useful, the grammar corrections, and I will say that you make poems look good on a page. That's wonderful,
    you can be my editor.

    However, Craig is right, it is a poetry workshop with the aim being to put poems on a page. The point being that you almost seem to miss that point.

    Rather than looking at window dressing it is better, imo, to consistently address the content.

    | Posted on 2011-01-14 17:23:19 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the comment on my poems, but I'll just say I'm not looking any grammer corrrection. I know how to do these things myself and if I don't I can find out. It's just I'm not posting for corrections of my work. A lot of the stuff you read up here has zero puctuation and that's because it's a writing workshop. I'm not saying these things aren't important, just that they're very open to interpretation. I wouldn't put them where you have them in your work and vice versa.

    I mostly ask for thoughts on my writing
    and thanks again for giving yours.
    | Posted on 2011-01-14 16:29:59 | by Raphael - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    No problem (:

    Aw, that's so nice..! A very subtle acrostic :D

    I just realised I made a typo... erg, I wrote 'bery' instead of 'very' so my apologies for that.

    --Esha (:
    | Posted on 2011-01-10 20:04:01 | by EshyFishy - [ Reply to This ] -



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