AshleyRox1Name: Ashley Hoadley ASL: 18/f/Pierce, NE, YUCK Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 4121 Life Story: Just ask me. [ Ignore User ] Favorites: -2 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 4225 D 11.58 Years 1.16 Quote: I love how i can be a total dork around yu and Yet yu still make me feel absolutely amazing |
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Mental shutdown
Mood: I have mentally checked outSo I've had a lot of shit going on lately..i got dumped, I was called n Emo Whore...not cool. I have had way to many panic attacks since my break up n he called me n yelled at me n made it worse. I have completely mentally checked out and I have been fed up with my friend Deagan because she just honestly doesn't care it feels like. I feel unloved but Deag says she loves me but she don't show it. It's different to say i love then to show it. I need something to get me down from this crazy high of shut down.
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| Emo Whore is a billion times better than preppy whore^_^ I'd write it on a name tag and wear it to school, show everyone that you don't give a fuck. What bitches think shouldn't matter to you. :)
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| | Posted on 2011-10-24 12:12:31 | by Undead37 - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| I can honestly say your poetry doesn't suck. It breaks the conventional ties that bind most poets. And you definitely throw your emotion in them.
To me that makes a great poet. Keep up the good work. H |
| | Posted on 2011-04-20 18:25:35 | by MinervaBlu - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| Your poetry (or at least, the one poem I've read of yours) makes sense. That wasn't what I was criticizing it for. 'Taking poetry seriously' means, in my book, actively working to improve at it. Part of that entails being open to critique.
Like I said, if you don't want critique on your poems--if you only want praise or 'I relate to this' statements--you need to put that in the description on the top of the page. I had no intent to insult you by offering my non-coddling opinion on your publicly posted piece. My apologies for that, I guess. |
| | Posted on 2011-04-18 16:42:43 | by saartha - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| This is not your private diary. This is a writing website, filled with people who take poetry seriously.
If you don't want comments on your poems, you should say that in the description area. |
| | Posted on 2011-04-18 16:17:37 | by saartha - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| | Posted on 2011-02-22 21:10:44 | by Undead37 - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| lololol isnt the song called 1985 tho? hahaha "The Girl All the Bad Guys Want" by Bowling for Soup used to be my favorite song, until I discovered Hollywood Undead<3.
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| | Posted on 2011-02-12 23:06:33 | by Undead37 - [ Reply to This ] - |
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