--Elite Writer Alias: AshleyRox1 Name: Ashley Hoadley ASL: 18/f/Pierce, NE, YUCK Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 2418 Life Story: Just ask me. [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: -2 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 2522 D 6.91 Years 0.69 Decades 84.07 Months 360.29 Weeks 2.522000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: I love how i can be a total dork around yu and Yet yu still make me feel absolutely amazing
So I've had a lot of shit going on lately..i got dumped, I was called n Emo Whore...not cool. I have had way to many panic attacks since my break up n he called me n yelled at me n made it worse. I have completely mentally checked out and I have been fed up with my friend Deagan because she just honestly doesn't care it feels like. I feel unloved but Deag says she loves me but she don't show it. It's different to say i love then to show it. I need something to get me down from this crazy high of shut down.
Your poetry (or at least, the one poem I've read of yours) makes sense. That wasn't what I was criticizing it for. 'Taking poetry seriously' means, in my book, actively working to improve at it. Part of that entails being open to critique.
Like I said, if you don't want critique on your poems--if you only want praise or 'I relate to this' statements--you need to put that in the description on the top of the page.
I had no intent to insult you by offering my non-coddling opinion on your publicly posted piece. My apologies for that, I guess.