--Elite Writer Alias: AshleyRox1 Name: Ashley Hoadley ASL: 18/f/Pierce, NE, YUCK Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 2366 Life Story: Just ask me. [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: -2 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 2470 D 6.77 Years 0.68 Decades 82.33 Months 352.86 Weeks 2.470000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: I love how i can be a total dork around yu and Yet yu still make me feel absolutely amazing
So I've had a lot of shit going on lately..i got dumped, I was called n Emo Whore...not cool. I have had way to many panic attacks since my break up n he called me n yelled at me n made it worse. I have completely mentally checked out and I have been fed up with my friend Deagan because she just honestly doesn't care it feels like. I feel unloved but Deag says she loves me but she don't show it. It's different to say i love then to show it. I need something to get me down from this crazy high of shut down.
Emo Whore is a billion times better than preppy whore^_^ I'd write it on a name tag and wear it to school, show everyone that you don't give a fuck. What bitches think shouldn't matter to you. :)
I can honestly say your poetry doesn't suck. It breaks the conventional ties that bind most poets. And you definitely throw your emotion in them.
To me that makes a great poet.
Keep up the good work.
Your poetry (or at least, the one poem I've read of yours) makes sense. That wasn't what I was criticizing it for. 'Taking poetry seriously' means, in my book, actively working to improve at it. Part of that entails being open to critique.
Like I said, if you don't want critique on your poems--if you only want praise or 'I relate to this' statements--you need to put that in the description on the top of the page.
I had no intent to insult you by offering my non-coddling opinion on your publicly posted piece. My apologies for that, I guess.
This is not your private diary. This is a writing website, filled with people who take poetry seriously.
If you don't want comments on your poems, you should say that in the description area.
lololol isnt the song called 1985 tho? hahaha "The Girl All the Bad Guys Want" by Bowling for Soup used to be my favorite song, until I discovered Hollywood Undead<3.
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