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    Journal: Mental shutdown
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    Mood: I have mentally checked out
      
    So I've had a lot of shit going on lately..i got dumped, I was called n Emo Whore...not cool. I have had way to many panic attacks since my break up n he called me n yelled at me n made it worse. I have completely mentally checked out and I have been fed up with my friend Deagan because she just honestly doesn't care it feels like. I feel unloved but Deag says she loves me but she don't show it. It's different to say i love then to show it. I need something to get me down from this crazy high of shut down.


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    Featured: The distance

     Melt down and metal check out
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     The unforgiven
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    ::Depressed : Class : Poetry :
     You got it
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     Do you feel it?
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    ::Depressed : Class : Poetry :
     Tired of this shit
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     I live for the day by Lindsay Lohan
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    ::Love : Class : Lyrics :
     Beautiful Death
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    ::Death : Class : Poetry :
     I hate this right now
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    ::Misc : Class : Rant :
     Bombed it, No..just give me and A
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     I have your key
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     Spininn by the ready set band
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     He's back! And he has my heart<3
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     Featured workThe distance
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     Random love?
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     Finding love?
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     This sucks
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     Oh *Shit*
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     I need my sleep but I think I'm in love<3
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     I hate being disrespected!!!
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     I hate being disrespected!!!
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    Emo Whore is a billion times better than preppy whore^_^ I'd write it on a name tag and wear it to school, show everyone that you don't give a fuck. What bitches think shouldn't matter to you. :)
    | Posted on 2011-10-24 12:12:31 | by Undead37 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I can honestly say your poetry doesn't suck. It breaks the conventional ties that bind most poets. And you definitely throw your emotion in them.
    To me that makes a great poet.
    Keep up the good work.

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    | Posted on 2011-04-20 18:25:35 | by MinervaBlu - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Your poetry (or at least, the one poem I've read of yours) makes sense. That wasn't what I was criticizing it for. 'Taking poetry seriously' means, in my book, actively working to improve at it. Part of that entails being open to critique.

    Like I said, if you don't want critique on your poems--if you only want praise or 'I relate to this' statements--you need to put that in the description on the top of the page.

    I had no intent to insult you by offering my non-coddling opinion on your publicly posted piece. My apologies for that, I guess.
    | Posted on 2011-04-18 16:42:43 | by saartha - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    This is not your private diary. This is a writing website, filled with people who take poetry seriously.
    If you don't want comments on your poems, you should say that in the description area.
    | Posted on 2011-04-18 16:17:37 | by saartha - [ Reply to This ] -
      
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    | Posted on 2011-02-22 21:10:44 | by Undead37 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    lololol isnt the song called 1985 tho? hahaha "The Girl All the Bad Guys Want" by Bowling for Soup used to be my favorite song, until I discovered Hollywood Undead<3.
    | Posted on 2011-02-12 23:06:33 | by Undead37 - [ Reply to This ] -



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