--Elite Writer Alias: AvalonDollika Name: Ana - Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 138 Life Story: perfectionism [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 0 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 188 D 0.52 Years 0.05 Decades 6.27 Months 26.86 Weeks 1.880000e+7 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: persistence is stronger than failure
Thank you very much for the comments. The shortening of the words is just to make it flow a little better. The g at the end of a word makes me pause very slightly when I don't mean to. I believe that would just be a personal bias, :P but, nonetheless, appreciate all positive criticism. Thank you for your spelling corrections, too. :P And, the one I titled, spanish for five is about my feeling that I need to leave the city I'm in if I'll ever be able to rap, like I'd very much like to. And, the feeling that being here, is hindering the development of my writing. It's as bland as the broken down buildings surrounding me.
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