--Elite Writer Alias: BenCollier Name: David Hackney ASL: Real Old Fart/ In Georgia Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 16 Life Story: Inspired to create [ Ignore User ]
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Thanks a ton for the comment on Justice, I really appreciate that you liked it. The reason the metre changes throughout the entire poem is because it was written as a rap to music and not as a poem. I don't know if you noticed but I use the word "just" in about every line in the poem, and then end with the conclusion about justice... A lot of people overlook it though... I'm not sure how to make it more obvious however. What do you think?
Thanks for your comments on "Bleed Into Me", I have planned on revising it for quite sometime. It is actually one of the poems I've ever written, so I really don't understand why so many like it. I'd prefer some of my other works personally, but as soon as I find the time I plan to do a rewrite of this.
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