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    Journal: Drinkin
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    Mood: Thinking...
      
    " BUT OSSIFER, I'm serfically pober!!" "I'm not as think as you drunk I am".


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     Jesus Diary
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     Why Men Cry
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     Because of God
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     Used to
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     Quiet Desperations
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     Little Woods
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     Cancer
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     My Father's Throne
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     Battle of Life
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     O Fine Wind
    :|| V: 175 | C: 3 ||:
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     Haikus
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     A Life for None
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     Headon
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     Stuff
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     I'm Gonna die young
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     My Hott Second Wife
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     Lucreetia The Cow
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     My life's partner
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     Ever
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     Baptized into Death
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    Thanks a ton for the comment on Justice, I really appreciate that you liked it. The reason the metre changes throughout the entire poem is because it was written as a rap to music and not as a poem. I don't know if you noticed but I use the word "just" in about every line in the poem, and then end with the conclusion about justice... A lot of people overlook it though... I'm not sure how to make it more obvious however. What do you think?
    | Posted on 2009-02-22 16:34:02 | by MrBear - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I really appreciate the comment on "Moonlight" I tend to write too fast...
    Thanks for the heads up!
    | Posted on 2009-02-21 06:12:36 | by Peacejoe - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for you feed back on "Sickened and Sweet." Much appreciated! And that is a wonderful suggestion!
    | Posted on 2009-02-20 20:19:33 | by amanda99737 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    im allowed to be angry okay... im crazy so uh
    | Posted on 2009-02-20 03:01:00 | by ladiesplanet1 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for your comments on "Bleed Into Me", I have planned on revising it for quite sometime. It is actually one of the poems I've ever written, so I really don't understand why so many like it. I'd prefer some of my other works personally, but as soon as I find the time I plan to do a rewrite of this.
    | Posted on 2007-09-25 15:45:04 | by Martin S. Allen - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for the comment on 'At the Sink', and for the fave addition! I greatly appreciate it.

    {Kate}
    | Posted on 2007-09-24 19:40:24 | by Jester_Gesture - [ Reply to This ] -



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