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    Journal: Drinkin
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    Mood: Thinking...
      
    " BUT OSSIFER, I'm serfically pober!!" "I'm not as think as you drunk I am".


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    you just made an ass of yourself...look at ass...
    | Posted on 2010-01-14 22:37:34 | by leocrates - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    nyah... thanks but no thanks.... meter ?! .... yours in christ... please do me a favour...... eeeshhhh !
    | Posted on 2010-01-08 19:21:57 | by col13x - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    sigh... and yours in a mindless plethora of religious claptrap... couldn't read it what a lame excuse.... but yours to what you will... sigh .. hefty flippin sigh
    | Posted on 2010-01-08 19:18:52 | by col13x - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you also for the favorites addition of "Old Paintings and Pinings," I really appreciate the beautiful comment you left and you taking time to read my work.
    | Posted on 2009-12-20 04:25:24 | by stonewashblues - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Firstly, I greatly appreciate your open-minded read of "Following the Star" and not writing it off with the first read. It was not a slam on Christ, no. It was more aligned to what you said. I just don't have the Christmas Cheer this year. I don't feel like manger scenes or celebrating the birth of a sacrificial baby. It's sad, first and foremost. It's macabre secondly. When I overthink it, it makes me very disappointed in God.
    | Posted on 2009-12-20 04:20:43 | by stonewashblues - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks a ton for the comment on Justice, I really appreciate that you liked it. The reason the metre changes throughout the entire poem is because it was written as a rap to music and not as a poem. I don't know if you noticed but I use the word "just" in about every line in the poem, and then end with the conclusion about justice... A lot of people overlook it though... I'm not sure how to make it more obvious however. What do you think?
    | Posted on 2009-02-22 16:34:02 | by MrBear - [ Reply to This ] -



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