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Pain
Mood: Stuff hurtsIf I knew the reason, I wouldn't care. But it radiates and pulses like an alarm. I have to know why. There's no on or off switch. There's no button for snooze. It just keeps pounding and no matter how hard I try I can't wake up to make it stop. I move this way, I turn that way, and straighten myself again. It's still there. I walk endlessly throughout the day, hours upon hours and strain and pain and there's nothing I can do to subdue it. I've put it in a box and wrapped it up. I put it in the freezer and hoped it would melt away. The hot shower didn't make it fry. I suppose I can put a chainsaw to it.
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| thank you =]
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| | Posted on 2013-03-29 12:12:37 | by love_confusion - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| Thanks for your recent comment......much appeciated.
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| | Posted on 2013-03-28 14:34:37 | by Frank Maguire - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| I am sorry for your confusions on "Promises".
The story of the poem is me promising to meet a girl. I don't show up and she waits for a long time, knowing that I wouldn't come. I put the reader in my place, as a way of connecting to their own emotion. Maybe they have done similar things in the past and can relate. I hope that clears somethings up, thanks for your commit (: |
| | Posted on 2013-03-27 21:40:51 | by Windigo - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| I had sort of a scene in a snow globe daydream about the criminal prospects of your creation. A 'set it afire, or end my criminal ways' kind of thing.
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| | Posted on 2013-03-26 20:17:26 | by monad - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| I am glad you enjoy morgue. The reason for me choosing this title is because I wanted the reader to think about a morgue while reading the story from a morticians point of view. Thank you for the criticism. :)
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| | Posted on 2013-03-26 14:06:10 | by Windigo - [ Reply to This ] - |
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