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    Journal: Goodbye
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    Mood: The Usual
      
    After over a decade at this site under two different aliases, I am ready to leave. Almost all the wonderful poets I once knew have moved on, and no one comments anymore.

    There will be no fanfare, no tearful waves goodbye, no turning around to glance back over a departing shoulder. There will only be the soft scuff of a door closing, and none will be the wiser.


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    | Posted on 2017-06-05 11:09:59 | by BlankSheet - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    BTW, the format is messed up. That may be why the flow was a bit impeded. Would you know how to minimize the text a bit? I know how to change the font but not the size.


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    | Posted on 2016-11-30 21:04:53 | by rev.jpfadeproof - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thank you SO much for your amaing comment! I really appreciate such a proper critque on my work. Its been so long since I had anything of the sort.

    Per you advice, I really appreciate it and will go back and see what i can do. I actually plan on doing a slight edit later tonight.

    Regarding "MorningStar", it originally didn't have that word, so I may go on and edit it out. Per "fatness", Kita is actually a super slim gal that wanted to gain a bit of weight. I used the word because while her body and slim, but shapely, as she also says, there is a real fatness and richness to her soul. She is a newly contracted model and I very proud of her, but her heart and soul is what I fell for, not primarily her looks.

    I will definitely go back and see what I can do, as all of my write are no more than 2n for 3rd drafts. I must spent more than the avg 35 minutes to an hour per piece. It is a glaring weakness of my artistry and I must really dig in and make each piece better.


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    | Posted on 2016-11-30 20:59:29 | by rev.jpfadeproof - [ Reply to This ] -



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