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    rainny ... /. . internet sucks ... cd roms are crap and fast food is nolonger "fast" food .../... /. dont feed the cat prozac anymore ... ../. save energy by just THINking ABOUT engery ... /... fool all by all means

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    Your awesome, keep writing.
    | Posted on 2011-08-01 00:43:16 | by snacky fish - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for your comment on "Odette"! I edited it a bit for the sake of better flow. I also did see a few parts that were unnecessary or too wordy. However, I did make sure to keep it my own. I believe one of my great weaknesses can be my tendency to be too concerned about what others will think of my writing, even if certain opinions are too petty. I do know I have a lot of room for improvement, so I appreciate certain criticisms. But thanks for the encouragement and for reminding me to "craft my art in my eyes," not in the eyes of others. I'll keep that in mind!
    | Posted on 2011-07-30 13:58:00 | by only_a_dreamX - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey man thanks for all the comments. Glad we can communicate on the more "darker levels" of poetry.

    I'll continue to support you as well, it'll be like old times.

    And remember, honesty may not be what people always want to hear, but it helps make them better poets.

    I mean it, don't be afraid to tear my poems apart, just make sure you tell me where I can improve; and I will offer up the same constructive criticism to you.

    -Matt
    | Posted on 2011-07-29 23:07:59 | by OneDarkFlame92 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    wow its been a while!!! Thanks for the comment
    | Posted on 2011-07-20 22:29:14 | by OneDarkFlame92 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    im glad you enjoyed my write The Plot. i promise, ill be back to return the favor and comment on something of yours, look forward to it.
    -aaron
    | Posted on 2010-09-18 05:55:24 | by Thief - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Working on my first ES short story, should be fun
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