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     A PRAYER FOR A TRUE LOVE
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     LOOKING AND FINDING LOVE
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     THIS FRIEND CALLED JESUS
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     THE BEST CHRISTMAS GIFT
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     EVERY TIME I LOOK AT YOU
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     CHEYENNE
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     To A Childhood Love
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     LIFT YOUR EYES TO JESUS
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     SWEET SIXTEEN AT HEART
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    Like your poem but felt it screamed out for revision that "Screams" didn't mention. Hope you'll accept some edits & revisions where I tweaked it for economy of flow etc...

    LIFT YOUR EYES TO JESUS

    (Description: Speak the verses; only the chorus is meant to be sung...)

    In your times of trials and trouble
    Everything seems to go so wrong
    When it seems that no one cares
    Lift your eyes to Jesus

    Turn your eyes to Him
    For He is always there
    He'll never leave nor forsake you
    Loves you when no one else cares

    Open your heart to Jesus
    He'll welcome you in
    Doesn't care who you are or what you've done
    He no respecter of persons
    Just waiting for you to come in

    Chorus

    Lift your eyes to Jesus
    He's the one who always cares
    Waiting for whomever
    Calls upon His name
    Loves each and everyone
    He'll never turn you away
    | Posted on 2011-10-29 11:34:55 | by uncreaTED - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey Bones, thanks so much for the five!! Glad you had the time to read my poem:>
    | Posted on 2008-03-15 19:02:45 | by mandy dupuis - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi bones. Hows it going?
    | Posted on 2007-08-19 18:36:59 | by WD-40 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey thanks for the comment and fav. on my stuff. That was pretty exciting. I'll get around to commmenting you back, soon. :D

    ~Venia
    | Posted on 2007-05-17 16:30:06 | by Venia - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi Bones, thanks so much for the comment and fav on tinny wishes. you know, your interpretation was rather interesting. real art produces a variey of perspective, and although that angle was not my intention, that fact thatit was interpreted in different ways by other means that i did my job

    (thanks again)
    | Posted on 2007-02-27 05:22:27 | by screams - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for posting on 'Lonley but not alone' your right. My 'friends' have.. ummm... disspaeared ^_^ And my real friends have come back to me!!!!
    (the ones in my head^_^)
    | Posted on 2007-02-24 07:06:06 | by ellesmera - [ Reply to This ] -



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