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    Living one more day in hopes of finding tomorrow. Perhaps it will be a brighter day when we are no longer evolving, changing, depleting or growing. The joys of yesterday will be taken over by the ecstasies of today and we will all rejoice at the music that has been made. Why cry over what cannot or will not come through in the end? We are simple creatures that live at the whim of our self-made destinies that do not last the test of time. We live as we believe we are meant to; we live as our subconcious dictates to us; we live as if a dark shadow were hanging over us.


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    Hello. Long time sence I've been back. Had a lot going on. Wishing you well. And enjoying your bueatiful poems
    | Posted on 2012-04-30 07:41:23 | by illusions35904 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey, I'm back around here. I'm sorry I disappeared for so long.
    | Posted on 2008-01-22 03:48:52 | by Zabriel - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for your feedback on my poem "Ghost Opera"...but I was just wondering if you could possibly tell me which lines you feel don't fit?
    | Posted on 2007-05-25 18:55:15 | by lithium_poetry - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks very much for your comment on the wine god.I'm expanding/changing most of my work were necessary at the moment so Ill probably take a look at it again soon.Your feedback was greatly appreciated thanks:-)

    -Craig
    | Posted on 2007-05-16 10:53:49 | by Raphael - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you kindly for the poem review. I'll keep in mind your comment about improving readability. I have several others like it, but they need to be reformatted towork here.
    | Posted on 2007-05-14 19:21:47 | by Ignis Fatuus - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks very much for the comment on hidden.To be honest its less of a question of will i change it and more of a question of will I delete it all together,its my least favorite piece I have
    and its not even because its badly written,its just because I didn't care about what i was saying at all so theres nothing more to be done with it except look back and cringe lol.Thanks again anyways...

    -craig
    | Posted on 2007-05-14 15:12:33 | by Raphael - [ Reply to This ] -



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