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    The fruit of silence is prayer;
    The fruit of prayer is faith;
    The fruit of faith is love;
    The fruit of love is service;
    The fruit of service is peace.

    --Mother Teresa--


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    Morning to you Camo.
    Thanks for your much valued comment on “Tree Amoral”.
    Firstly, it was composed on the foundation of my religious concepts that I did not reveal directly in the words but well in a sort of “hidden” way.
    Been an Israel convert – not Jewish thought but Christian - according to my Bible interpretations, the Western World as a whole comprise the 10 Lost or dispersed 10 Tribes of Israel, known from Scriptures as the House of Israel. With Judah and Benjamin referred to as the House of Judah, the 2 known Tribes today called the Jews. The word “Jew” should read “Judean” and only appeared in Scriptures after the House of Judah returned from their captivity from Babylon. Only the 2 tribes returned to Palestine. The 10 Tribes banned to Assyria never returned but is still in dispersion. Actually lost. I believe we are them.

    Now, back to the poem. Eve was tempted by Lucifer (Satan) and was enticed to having sexual relations with him from which Cain was born. Taking a bite from that proverbial apple as the saying goes. Cain being evil could not have been born from his godly parents only. Christ and John the Baptist directly referred to the Pharisees that they also had Satan the devil as father.
    “Trees” are referred to as “people” as “man” as a “ nation” as a person as well. Same as family “trees” and so on. Thus my poem referrers to this particular “Tree” from Paradise which is today still very busy with “Amoral” ré the dictionary Word Power Reader’s Digest.: adjective “having no moral sense” and “unconcerned with right and wrong”.
    And that is what the poem referrers to. Satan the Serpent and so on. Sexual relations were Scriptures requires it and approve of is of course not immoral but a Divine act. But – beware the immoral part – that prohibited part is what the poem is about. Imagine their Shame and tribulations after that act in Paradise. My most recent poem is also about that episode. “Jack and Jill”. Well I sincerely hope to have cleared the question up a bit. There are many related question about this, but most of it remains a mystery. Thanks again Camo. Regards. Joachim.
    | Posted on 2008-07-24 08:23:35 | by Joachim - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hey hey hey!!! thanks for taking the time to read my poem, YOU. and for writing that super long comment. its nice to have a comment that isnt three lines long. lol!
    thanks

    keepin it real!
    ~annie
    | Posted on 2008-07-21 14:28:18 | by annie smith - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    yeah dude. it has been a while.
    all kindsa new and interesting developments happening down here... im THE supervisor at my work which means i now get to try and coordinate 40 staff [all of whom are students with crazy timetables] and keep the foodcourt running smoothly... madness in a jar.
    my pastor resigned a coupla months ago and ive had a coupla opportunities to preach which has been really exciting and really challenging.
    youth group is going well too.

    whats new with you?
    are you at t-col this year or...?
    | Posted on 2008-07-17 04:48:28 | by Someones Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hey
    i keep seeing your name on the sign-in page recently so i thought id hop skip and jump over to your page and check you out.

    whats new?
    | Posted on 2008-07-15 05:49:10 | by Someones Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    nothing too crazy though i did end up going on a fun run lol.
    i was a marshall to make sure the kids didnt cross the road and didnt go the wrong way and then when the last kid passed me i ended up running with them and ushering them back to school. it was hilarious. they thought i was crazy. perfect.
    | Posted on 2007-11-29 06:01:06 | by Someones Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hey hows all those things going?
    did you apply to t-col after all that?
    whats the plan?

    hope your smiling and brilliant and all
    | Posted on 2007-11-27 00:30:02 | by Someones Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] -



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