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She's a cheese ball, always cheesin' with tears like waterfalls from eyes bleedin.' (clear liquids!) But, she's not sad yet happy! To be loungin' around in my company. It's relaxing, being there on the ground spinning arms wrapped around sides laughing At each others cries! ..Is exciting just to be able to see the way in which the world cannot be.. all lies. To have been side by side coinciding minds alike in improvising the ways we'll blink, speak, and think we ought to be doing so.. At the peak like springs young bright glow birds and owls in hollow holes will 'whoo' and sing as night comes and goes.. Reminding me of mornings i'd wake up next to you still asleep, like before I went to bed just as beauitful. Cheese ball!?!??!?! BBQ?!?!!?? COOKIE?!?!? yeah i thought soo.....

| Posted on 2009-07-21 20:13:24 | by IleriahMarie - [ Reply to This ] -

haha do i come off as rough, or is that your standard punchline?

| Posted on 2009-01-11 18:34:20 | by trouble - [ Reply to This ] -

oh. hi. that was so long ago i was really confused

| Posted on 2009-01-11 17:38:35 | by trouble - [ Reply to This ] -

| Posted on 2008-12-17 23:31:32 | by ANTI - [ Reply to This ] -

is pot really that great? (on further inspection, i see your moniker is not "cannabis" but the quite witty "cannablis." this prompts me to ask: are you blissful??) furthermore, here is a great band from indiana. they're much better live than video or whatsit. i present to you: reverend peyton and his big damn band:

| Posted on 2008-12-07 08:27:12 | by trouble - [ Reply to This ] -

Look at my poem mathematics if you want to know how I feel about shape in general. Or look at my poem Dirty Portrait which features a shape that is similar to your poem yet, I think, it's a bit easier on the eyes. Long lines aren't that long and shorter ones that short. In that one I didn't care about shape at all and I clearly expressed that in the beginning. What I meant to say in my first reply is that some subject matter lends itself to the style you used but some doesn't, it's all a matter of shape complimenting content.

| Posted on 2008-11-07 18:24:39 | by Paradox - [ Reply to This ] -

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