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    --Elite Writer
    Alias: Cannablisjunkie
    Name: Pablo De-Jesus Quintana
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     Pablo the disector
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     Daisey blue lies too..
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     There's no love in outterspace, we can't
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     only the kings horses
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     Like putting that spray cheese stuff on those bbq
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     As I fill my lungs -:-
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     I didn't eat today but, I medicated
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     Cha-Cha-Cha
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     that faulty organ centered in my chest
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     Picture Perfect
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     A Man amungst men, alike.
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     Writing it down for you
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     Feed my pains, before hunger gains
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     dead wrong
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     scratch pad 2
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     diamond dance on the water front
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     It's how she grooves. It moves me too.
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    She's a cheese ball, always
    cheesin' with tears like waterfalls
    from eyes bleedin.' (clear liquids!)

    But, she's not sad yet happy!
    To be loungin' around in my company.
    It's relaxing, being there on the ground spinning
    arms wrapped around sides laughing

    At each others cries!
    ..Is exciting just to be able to see
    the way in which the world cannot be.. all lies.

    To have been side by side coinciding
    minds alike in improvising the ways
    we'll blink, speak, and think we ought to be doing so..

    At the peak like springs young bright glow
    birds and owls in hollow holes
    will 'whoo' and sing as night comes and goes..
    Reminding me of mornings i'd wake up next to you
    still asleep, like before I went to bed just as beauitful.





    Cheese ball!?!??!?! BBQ?!?!!?? COOKIE?!?!? yeah i thought soo.....
    | Posted on 2009-07-21 20:13:24 | by IleriahMarie - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    haha

    do i come off as rough, or is that your standard punchline?
    | Posted on 2009-01-11 18:34:20 | by trouble - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    oh. hi.
    that was so long ago i was really confused
    | Posted on 2009-01-11 17:38:35 | by trouble - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    | Posted on 2008-12-17 23:31:32 | by ANTI - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    is pot really that great?
    (on further inspection, i see your moniker is not "cannabis" but the quite witty "cannablis." this prompts me to ask: are you blissful??)



    furthermore, here is a great band from indiana. they're much better live than video or whatsit.

    i present to you:
    reverend peyton and his big damn band:


    | Posted on 2008-12-07 08:27:12 | by trouble - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Look at my poem mathematics if you want to know how I feel about shape in general. Or look at my poem Dirty Portrait which features a shape that is similar to your poem yet, I think, it's a bit easier on the eyes. Long lines aren't that long and shorter ones that short. In that one I didn't care about shape at all and I clearly expressed that in the beginning. What I meant to say in my first reply is that some subject matter lends itself to the style you used but some doesn't, it's all a matter of shape complimenting content.
    | Posted on 2008-11-07 18:24:39 | by Paradox - [ Reply to This ] -



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