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Name: Marco Valencia
ASL: 35/M/NY
Website:[ Education ]
Days Away: 3590
Life Story: In progress
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Fire dance with me


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Without Consent by JanePlane
abc sex by taramarie
Ingrid by Sacred Sindy
Voodoo on the Bayou by DevilDinosaur
long time by ertha
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   Detail Award: For always thinking one step further.

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Nocturn

Mood: The Usual
  
Low the sun
Black strokes gives chase
the stars stand sentinels

Red the fire
New moon waves edge closer
Unseen but heard

Warm her skin
his arms a cloak
Filled with restless yearning

Sea salt and scent
From skin to lips Her taste
infused with its flavor

Darkness broken
Purple hues from out the horizon
the waves at their feet awaken



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 The Gnaw of Deathly Hunger
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 Metaphors Incomplete
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 When in your Company
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 Bodega Blues
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 Chrysalis Waking
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 Flores Martyrum
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 David
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 El Yaque del Norte
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::Longing : Class : Poetry :
 Implosion
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::Serious : Class : Poetry :
 Avalanche
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 Merging
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 Anti-determinism
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 Sour Wine
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 Solitary Confinement
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::Longing : Class : Poetry :
 Brain Fucked Mush (revised)
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::Venting : Class : Poetry :
 Concrete Trees
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 A Poem On Loan
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 Drought
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 There Is One Love
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 Frayed
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Hey Marco, Thanks for looking at Chrysalis--thanks for the catch on savour, I thought it was the same as flavour--hmmm. As for negative connotations,-- were intended, in fact there's an underlay of negative in the whole thing, no? I wish I had more time to read and comment on more of yours, so short on time lately, I'll be back at some point. Thanks, Chris.
| Posted on 2012-03-08 15:54:42 | by ponykeeper - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Did I thank you for what you wrote about "Without Consent"? I've been out of town and offline (in more than one way) for a while now. I just wanted to make sure I told you how much I appreciate your in-depth analysis of my piece. And I agree about the stanza with fairy and the pixie references. I may use some punctuation there or do some changing of words. I'll let you know what I come up with.

Thanks again.

Jane
| Posted on 2011-11-30 15:11:27 | by JanePlane - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thank you for the awesome comment on "Scribbling"... good to see you again!
| Posted on 2011-11-20 18:06:03 | by Runes - [ Reply to This ] -
  
A belated thank you for your comment.
I barely stop in.

Btw, this is Jase/alteredlife.
| Posted on 2011-11-17 08:05:54 | by trinityfinger - [ Reply to This ] -
  
smoke as an external manifestation of a smokers inner state...

(smile).

thank you so much for your thoughts. yes, i can see what you mean about the exhales. smoke has this life of its on when it connects with light.

i was watching the - sea inside with javier bardem (sp?). it was like this moment captured, and all could move, except him.

nice to see you!

hope all is well in your world.
| Posted on 2011-11-06 18:52:41 | by isabella - [ Reply to This ] -
  
exhausted is what i am. i went from being so horribly upset and hopeless to overwhelmed and excited and there hasnt been any sleep in either of those states for two weeks now lol

but ive found a home for us so i will start setting up house and when he gets here [one month from today!!!] our real forever will start

hows you? and your princess?
| Posted on 2011-11-05 19:47:54 | by Someones Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] -



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