Hey Marco, Thanks for looking at Chrysalis--thanks for the catch on savour, I thought it was the same as flavour--hmmm. As for negative connotations,-- were intended, in fact there's an underlay of negative in the whole thing, no? I wish I had more time to read and comment on more of yours, so short on time lately, I'll be back at some point. Thanks, Chris.
Did I thank you for what you wrote about "Without Consent"? I've been out of town and offline (in more than one way) for a while now. I just wanted to make sure I told you how much I appreciate your in-depth analysis of my piece. And I agree about the stanza with fairy and the pixie references. I may use some punctuation there or do some changing of words. I'll let you know what I come up with.