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    Name: Carrie
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    Currently Stalking: Sagittrevealed

    Journal: Alone
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    Mood: Depressed
      
    Increasingly isolated, by my own hand and by the disinterest of friends and family.


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    Carrie, thanks for taking the time to read Observing Love. I know its long and could be condensed but it I left it for my husband who humors my writiing but only gets about half of it.
    | Posted on 2015-04-12 23:20:03 | by jaycee - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I wrote this when I was way back in college. Being in such close proximity to 10 to 15 thousand women in our learning environment caused me this daydream. Perhaps it was a little bit forward of me but take you in the water doesn't have to be a sexuality, more of a genetic pool sort of thing. A mutual sociality.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2015-03-20 14:21:22 | by monad - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Carrie,
    Thanks to the comment on "Reflections of Grief" Anger was not an emotion that has set in at that point and was not an emotion that was evident in his friends. Survivor's guilt was rampant though. Bradley was killed in an car accident. Maybe timing and how makes a difference in how death is handled.
    | Posted on 2015-01-21 16:13:27 | by jaycee - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks Carrie for the comment. I appreciate your feedback and what you said about the words. As for the video, i guess you had to be there, anyway as long as the thing as a whole presents to me that same validity thats all im worried about, being true to me.

    Hope you are managing the depression, cheers to you.
    | Posted on 2015-01-19 18:16:25 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for the comment :) You may give me as much detail in your comments as you wish. I love criticism. I prefer constructive criticism, but I don't mind either way, haha. A lot of the work I posted is from when I was in high school so it's not as good as my later/more recent work. I need to go through them all and update them, haha. Thanks so much! Keep up the reading, I haven't gotten a lot of comments on my writing every so I love any words on them :)
    | Posted on 2015-01-17 18:16:53 | by riverrei - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Yes, the "sad eyed lady" is more of an allusion to the feminine mystique in general. An abstract concept in fact.
    | Posted on 2015-01-17 16:00:41 | by monad - [ Reply to This ] -



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