--Elite Writer Alias: Carosuel Name: Carrie ASL: 26/F/Twirlwind Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 101 Life Story: Sharp. [ Ignore User ]
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Thanks for your comments on Time Tested. I will edit at some point. It is not new and I find I can either edit immediately or sometimes not at all as I craft quickly from the emotion or thought of a moment and so the poems become a diary of sorts. However, I have never really liked the end of this one, so I'll try a rework. Yes the form is deliberately choppy. It is the give and take and day to day mess of a long marriage.
I appreciate you leaving the comment.
Hi, Carrie, sorry for responding this late but I haven't been on this site for a long time now. I haven't written much lately that's why. I guess I am gaming too much on this PC and just can't find the time to do something serious. :D I will try to post some stuff though, it's been too long now since I've written something...
Thank you so much for you comments on 'With the hours, come the flowers' and 'They All Have But One Spirit'. I'm glad you enjoyed them. I am quite proud of those two pieces myself, and it really warmed my heart reading your comments, especially on 'One Spirit' where you said it was 'really remarkable'. You brought a smile to my face and made my heart sing.