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    Name: Carrie
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    Journal: Alone
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    Mood: Depressed
      
    Increasingly isolated, by my own hand and by the disinterest of friends and family.


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    Carrie,
    Thanks for your comments on Time Tested. I will edit at some point. It is not new and I find I can either edit immediately or sometimes not at all as I craft quickly from the emotion or thought of a moment and so the poems become a diary of sorts. However, I have never really liked the end of this one, so I'll try a rework. Yes the form is deliberately choppy. It is the give and take and day to day mess of a long marriage.
    I appreciate you leaving the comment.
    ~jan
    | Posted on 2015-01-14 09:12:34 | by jaycee - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks :)
    | Posted on 2014-10-21 15:34:01 | by etheror - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I've missed you....glad to see you are still "findable" in this great big world. Talk soon yes.

    Krys
    | Posted on 2013-07-17 11:32:40 | by was_i_ever_real - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi, Carrie, sorry for responding this late but I haven't been on this site for a long time now. I haven't written much lately that's why. I guess I am gaming too much on this PC and just can't find the time to do something serious. :D I will try to post some stuff though, it's been too long now since I've written something...
    | Posted on 2013-07-04 20:58:08 | by Paradox - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you so much for you comments on 'With the hours, come the flowers' and 'They All Have But One Spirit'. I'm glad you enjoyed them. I am quite proud of those two pieces myself, and it really warmed my heart reading your comments, especially on 'One Spirit' where you said it was 'really remarkable'. You brought a smile to my face and made my heart sing.

    Yours,
    Ruqyo Highsong
    | Posted on 2013-06-14 13:28:40 | by AsiaticFox - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I ask you again, do you sell tornado lariats in twirlwind?? We could definitely use some!!

    Monad

    PS: I wouldn't lightening bow hat pick lie!!

    | Posted on 2013-06-07 11:38:17 | by monad - [ Reply to This ] -



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